Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Educating children is a more difficult task today than it was in the past because they spend so much time on cell phone, online games, and social networking Web site
Undoubtly, in the modern world, children have more freedom from their parents' treatment than past. But the question here is whether this situation have adverse effect on their treatment or education or demeanor? I think they can exploit from more sources to find their favorable ways of life. I try to assert my opinion in the following essays.
First, by emerging social media and intelligent phone, childern have more means to reach properly education. In the consequence of this concept, one-aspect education from school or just from the parents will be eliminated and students can conviniently gain their favorit subject via Youtube's video or Google search. This idea can be more visible when a kid haven't a good teacher or suitable parents. In this circumstance, the child can easily uses information in Web sites that are not available for children in any times before. For example, if a child had teroumondesly enthusiam to learn mathematic in the medieval periods, and as the same time, he had a teacher who hadn't proper khnowledge or had teribble manner, so he must to forgot the math for permanent or maybe temorary.
Inaddition, another facet we could have an argument is recognizing talents or favorabl ways for the continuing of life by childern. In the past days, childern had a hard challenge to detecting their talents and if they found it, certainly these talents were be among the limited ways that they were came across them. But now, a child in the Asia has more chance to be familiar with Europan culture and recognize that her talent or favor is in the italian dance, so she could following her favor more easier.
Conclusionly, variety aspects of education in conjunction with well-suited space for recognizing the talent that is prepared by modern society, contribute to vibrant life for children.
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- Do you agree or disagree with the following statements Because people are busy doing so many different things they do very few things well Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer 63
- In the United States medical information about patients traditionally has been recorded and stored on paper forms However there are efforts to persuade doctors to adopt electronic medical record systems in which information about patients is stored in ele 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: haven't
...his idea can be more visible when a kid havent a good teacher or suitable parents. In ...
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Line 3, column 444, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'use'
Suggestion: use
...this circumstance, the child can easily uses information in Web sites that are not a...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: hadn't
... as the same time, he had a teacher who hadnt proper khnowledge or had teribble manne...
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Line 5, column 53, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...another facet we could have an argument is recognizing talents or favorabl ways for the contin...
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Line 5, column 259, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'been'.
Suggestion: been
... found it, certainly these talents were be among the limited ways that they were c...
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Line 5, column 300, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'come'.
Suggestion: come
...e among the limited ways that they were came across them. But now, a child in the As...
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Line 5, column 476, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'could' requires the base form of the verb: 'follow'
Suggestion: follow
...r is in the italian dance, so she could following her favor more easier. Conclusionly,...
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Line 5, column 496, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'easier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: easier
...dance, so she could following her favor more easier. Conclusionly, variety aspects of ed...
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Line 7, column 186, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ontribute to vibrant life for children.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, may, so, thus, well, for example, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 43.0788530466 65% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 52.1666666667 73% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1527.0 1977.66487455 77% => OK
No of words: 304.0 407.700716846 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02302631579 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71140243569 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.601973684211 0.524837075471 115% => OK
syllable_count: 474.3 618.680645161 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.4030298401 48.9658058833 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.461538462 100.406767564 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3846153846 20.6045352989 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.38461538462 5.45110844103 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.150932985596 0.236089414692 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0546951056307 0.076458572812 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0344311665199 0.0737576698707 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0874336858844 0.150856017488 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.017208431376 0.0645574589148 27% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 11.7677419355 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 58.1214874552 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 10.9000537634 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.19 8.01818996416 115% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 86.8835125448 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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