Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Eighteen-year-olds are not mature enough to vote.
Use specific examples and details to support your opinion.
Currently, there is a widespread discussion about the effects of movies and television to young people are more negative or positive. In my perspective, however, they have more positive effects and play an important role in young people's life.
First of all, visual media is an excellent way to relax the young. In recent yeaers, numerous homework and extra lessons after school make them tired and stressful. However, thay can seldom enjoy some outdoor activities, as their friends are suffering from the same terrible tasks, which makes indoor activities, such as visual media, seem a good solution. A few months ago, I was quite curious about why my little sister often watching TV at home instead of playing with her friends, then she told me they were all busy with their homeworks. Therefore, in my opinion, enjoying visual media will better the young’s mental health today.
On top of that, new movies and TV programs are wonderful social topic. When you want to start a concersation with someone you have never meet, it is not a good choice to begin with economic issues, political events or scientific problems, as you two may major in different subject and talking about political events is a dangerous behaviour for those who live in a foreign country. Nevertheless, the experience of watching the same video or the coherent preference of one type of opera provides you with the road to get closer to each other. As my academic advisor once said, “Though both of you major in history, you may have totally different opinion toward the Renaissance, which will lead to an arguement”. It it not worthy to have a fight with your potential girlfriend, right?
In conclusion, movies and televisions have more positive effects than negative effecte on young people, since it provides them with a neccessary entertainment and a suitable topic for communication.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 712, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: It
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, may, nevertheless, so, then, therefore, in conclusion, such as, talking about, first of all, in my opinion, to begin with, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 43.0788530466 63% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 52.1666666667 77% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1571.0 1977.66487455 79% => OK
No of words: 311.0 407.700716846 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05144694534 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73831169279 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 212.727598566 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.636655948553 0.524837075471 121% => OK
syllable_count: 486.0 618.680645161 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.9631179949 48.9658058833 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.846153846 100.406767564 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.9230769231 20.6045352989 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.0769230769 5.45110844103 222% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0931417617995 0.236089414692 39% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0309421905268 0.076458572812 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0336237440217 0.0737576698707 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0455884685357 0.150856017488 30% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0480865181678 0.0645574589148 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 11.7677419355 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 58.1214874552 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 10.9000537634 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.89 8.01818996416 111% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 86.8835125448 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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