Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: "Every Individual should spend at least a year living in a foreign country?" Provide reason and examples to support your opinion.
Generally some prefers comfy to stays in their private zone due to that people vanishes in the majority or oneself with their uniqueness is being lost, other feels to be adventurous enough by accepting realistic part and with boldness to switch from their secured boundaries that will creates more self-esteem and provide lots of lively experience to engrave and tackle the fears of long run life. So when ever probability to leave my comfort zone, cherish that to my chores and make it as pros too. Mainly I am fully agree to the statement as individual genders should spend once a year in foreign country that will mold and teach everyone to become therir best form. In such case this essay justified with my own experience and three specific reasons.
First of all, countries always cherish, arise and fully in bond with their traditional cultural heritage and giving more priority towards their own specified language of speaking, specified rules and regulations for their people in accordance to government laws. If its oppourtunities tries shoot upon any of the person, quiet had participating chances in other country that will be useful part in their circumstances of the aspects. Gaining enormous of lively events when engaging with their native people's will lead in better understanding of the ritual culture based on their way of festival celebrations or any kind of occations excelling as like Halloween Day modified to All Saints Day, each one of us costumed like ghost in America. Spending time with native speakers creates good accent and gives genuine behavior accordingly changes occurs in the public as in personal as well as professional. In the mean of it each countries has their law enforcement regarding control of crimes, conservation of nature regarding cleanliness and taking safety measures to the society with the help of cop. As for as different laws abide there when the garbage or waste thrown and spitting or littering in public, mainly prohibited which is not possible at all in USA, UK. In such case of happing will provide them higher punishments which equal to their crime, may be are of results them in penalty paying in the range of Dolor’s and Pound’s, would not lot easy for their people becomes am problematic.
At last in agreeing to the part of my reasons illustrated above, there is an example over Italian verse Chinese or Japanese Culture. Italian young adults can move out for their elaborative career in dealing of personal wish of designing lifestyle with help of self-esteem will pull them up anyhow, likewise they can choose their life partner but probably not going to work with Chinese or Japanese because they are concervative type that adults has the counter act on their decision by their elders.
Finally conclude this essay expelling personal experience as I am a whelmed person, likes travelling a lot, love to be adventurous and enthusiastic in invading many paces that thrives me to search and learn the new things which are of quite possible to me. Likewise during end of my grade school, start of vocation that my family had plan for a trip to Malaysia, it is pretty nice place with their own prosperous cultural bound, learned many things about their language and their sociological rule in saving the public property which is been a new situation for me because a man arrested due to he smoked in a public place inspite of mentioned board with NO SMOKING. Off course, it’s a good work by cop. That an interesting thing which I have noticed. And I Claimed with my own acknowledge and opinion that strictly accepting the statement by enough providing the feasible reasons.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'agreed'.
Suggestion: agreed
... make it as pros too. Mainly I am fully agree to the statement as individual genders ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e there when the garbage or waste thrown and spitting or littering in public, mai...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Finally,
...act on their decision by their elders. Finally conclude this essay expelling personal ...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Likewise,
...ings which are of quite possible to me. Likewise during end of my grade school, start of...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... enough providing the feasible reasons.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, but, finally, first, if, likewise, may, regarding, so, thus, well, as for, kind of, as well as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 25.0 13.8261648746 181% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.0286738351 163% => OK
Pronoun: 58.0 43.0788530466 135% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 103.0 52.1666666667 197% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3034.0 1977.66487455 153% => OK
No of words: 613.0 407.700716846 150% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94942903752 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.97582523872 4.48103885553 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66097369618 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 343.0 212.727598566 161% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.559543230016 0.524837075471 107% => OK
syllable_count: 952.2 618.680645161 154% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 34.0 20.1344086022 169% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 109.619318834 48.9658058833 224% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 168.555555556 100.406767564 168% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.0555555556 20.6045352989 165% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.72222222222 5.45110844103 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.132282720831 0.236089414692 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0473359855041 0.076458572812 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0559417594326 0.0737576698707 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0861210511294 0.150856017488 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0368596573254 0.0645574589148 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.9 11.7677419355 161% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.97 58.1214874552 64% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.6 10.1575268817 163% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 10.9000537634 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.29 8.01818996416 116% => OK
difficult_words: 154.0 86.8835125448 177% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 10.002688172 190% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.6 10.0537634409 155% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 10.247311828 185% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Write the essay in 30 minutes.
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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