Thorough history communication between different people has been played a significant role in society. Although in the past mankind usually used to live in an extended family, nowadays it is rare to see these kinds of family. Some people think that the extended family (grandparents, cousins, aunts, and uncles) is less important now than it was in the past, by the way, the others are against this idea. Hence both ideas are respectable, from my own perspective, I highly support the first idea and in the next paragraphs will delve into the main reasons.
The most important reason which plays the main role in decreasing number of extended families is time. Unlike old times, in the 21st Century, people are so busy with a lot of matters such as their business, education, personal life and etc. So the most major part of their daily time will be occupied by personal matters and they do not have enough leisure to convey with other members of the family. A study in 2018 indicated that youth usually visited their aunts and uncle only 1 per year during the new year holidays.
Another reason which deserves some words here is that in this decade people usually have an rural life and they live far from each other. If we look at 100 years ago, they were less than 20 big cities and most of the population of the world lived in the countryside and in most cases, the distance between their house was so small. So they were able to met their family every day. In contrast, nowadays it is probable that one member of the family lives in another city or even another country and they speak together only by the internet.
Although all the aforementioned reasons are those which may be one finds out at first glance, but still, there is one reason. These days people barely continue their parent's jobs. Because of this, they do not have to stick to their parents or grandfathers to learn their abilities. In these days everybody chooses the job which he likes and so they are more freeer than last.
To make a long story short, if someone accurately looks at these reasons, soon will realize that extended families are decreasing day by day. Of course this phenomenon has its advantages and disadvantages, but what is obvious is that due to improvement of technology, these changes in family relationship are invetable.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 404, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
... way, the others are against this idea. Hence both ideas are respectable, from my own...
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Line 3, column 233, Rule ID: AND_ETC[1]
Message: Use simply 'etc.'.
Suggestion: etc.
...heir business, education, personal life and etc. So the most major part of their daily t...
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Line 5, column 90, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...that in this decade people usually have an rural life and they live far from each ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, hence, if, look, may, so, still, in contrast, of course, such as, by the way, in most cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 15.1003584229 146% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 43.0788530466 91% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 52.1666666667 105% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1923.0 1977.66487455 97% => OK
No of words: 406.0 407.700716846 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.73645320197 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48881294772 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46938717852 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Unique words: 230.0 212.727598566 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.566502463054 0.524837075471 108% => OK
syllable_count: 605.7 618.680645161 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.791823308 48.9658058833 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.833333333 100.406767564 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5555555556 20.6045352989 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.72222222222 5.45110844103 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.161898062701 0.236089414692 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.050397734491 0.076458572812 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0561417786875 0.0737576698707 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0878852956549 0.150856017488 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0473678612071 0.0645574589148 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 11.7677419355 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.51 10.9000537634 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.72 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 86.8835125448 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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