A controversial debate is often raised about the qualities of a good leader. Some groups of people may hold the view that a good leader should implement his own ideas and thoughts. Others, however, may have an opposing view and feel that a good leader should give attention to other employees views. From vantage point, I concur with the latter groups for the reasons I address in my essay.
The first exquisite point to be mentioned is that active listener leader encourages employees to share their thoughts. It is crystal clear that two brains think much better than one brain! Leaders who do not share their thoughts with others end up having an inexperienced, demotivated and unsuccessful team. However, a leader who share his thoughts with other caqn be a member of a winning team. Ultimately, all members of the team would be successful.
The second reason which deserves some thought is that active listener leader encourages cooperation between team members. Cooperation between team members can create synergy which eventually leads to the achievement of goals. Without this team spirit, team members cannot fulfill their aspiration. A vivid example to illustrate my view point is the outstanding sales achievement that my team and I accomplished in 2016. Because of the wise vision and wisdom my leader , we were able to achieve such an outstanding results.
Although the aforementioned reasons are the first to cross my mind at a glance, they are by no means the only reasons available. In fact, there is another subtle reason available. The noteworthy, refreshing, intelligible results of a study that was published in the American business Journal which showed that active listener leaders have significantly increase significantly companies' profits. This study was conducted on 120 companies in different sectors to avoid bias.
Contemplating the aforementioned reason, one soon realizes that active listening is an important characteristic for a successful leader. it does not only create a motivated team, but also it can enhances companies profits
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, second, so, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 43.0788530466 67% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 52.1666666667 61% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1745.0 1977.66487455 88% => OK
No of words: 330.0 407.700716846 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28787878788 4.8611393121 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26214759535 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93872459796 2.67179642975 110% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 212.727598566 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.569696969697 0.524837075471 109% => OK
syllable_count: 527.4 618.680645161 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.8700103904 48.9658058833 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.8421052632 100.406767564 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3684210526 20.6045352989 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.89473684211 5.45110844103 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.161022885006 0.236089414692 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0503001495811 0.076458572812 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.061732061048 0.0737576698707 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0893547568826 0.150856017488 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0732076910351 0.0645574589148 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 11.7677419355 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 58.1214874552 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 10.9000537634 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 86.8835125448 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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