The reading and the lecture both discuss the genuinity of coins discovered by native Americans one thousand years ago. The author claims that the coins are fake. However, the lecturer refutes the author's assessment. He demonstrates three reasons to cast doubt on the claims made in the reading.
The first allegation of script against which the orator argues is the great distance of coin discovery away from the Norse settlements. In contrast, the professor highlights the fact that the Norse did not stay in one place. Instead, they move from one place to another. Confidently, the lecturer argues that there were other objects which belong to the Norse that were found in the same place.
Second, according to the text there were no other coins discovered in the same region. The speaker also find this idea debatable. He bolster his opinion by stating that the Norse settlers did not stay in the same region all the time, but they use to go back to Europe, when they go back, they use to pack all their belonging with them.
Finally,The lecturer contrast the fallacy of the passage that the native American did not use coins when the Norse arrived to the US. Again the lecturer disagree with the author. He contends that Native American did not use coins as money, nevertheless, they still consider them as something valuable. Thus, would use them as neck-louses or jewelries
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...fake. However, the lecturer refutes the authors assessment. He demonstrates three reaso...
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...eaker also find this idea debatable. He bolster his opinion by stating that the Norse s...
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... the same region all the time, but they use to go back to Europe, when they go back...
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...back to Europe, when they go back, they use to pack all their belonging with them. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, however, nevertheless, second, so, still, thus, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 10.4613686534 48% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 5.04856512141 20% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 7.30242825607 41% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 12.0772626932 91% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 22.412803532 98% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 30.3222958057 86% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.01324503311 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1152.0 1373.03311258 84% => OK
No of words: 235.0 270.72406181 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90212765957 5.08290768461 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91531732006 4.04702891845 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43587195052 2.5805825403 94% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 145.348785872 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.553191489362 0.540411800872 102% => OK
syllable_count: 354.6 419.366225166 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 3.25607064018 184% => OK
Article: 8.0 8.23620309051 97% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 13.0662251656 115% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 21.2450331126 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.2968201452 49.2860985944 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.8 110.228320801 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6666666667 21.698381199 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.73333333333 7.06452816374 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 4.19205298013 191% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 4.33554083885 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 4.45695364238 90% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.27373068433 187% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.300631223612 0.272083759551 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0952596084098 0.0996497079465 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0951484977645 0.0662205650399 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17971673679 0.162205337803 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0528674100994 0.0443174109184 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 13.3589403974 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 53.8541721854 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.0289183223 73% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.84 12.2367328918 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.01 8.42419426049 95% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 63.6247240618 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.7273730684 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.498013245 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.2008830022 71% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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