A controversial debate which is raised about the pros and cons of children watching television. Some groups of people hold the view that watching television is entertaining for kids thus, children should not be withheld from watching it. However, some other groups may hold an opposing view and feel that watching television might be more harmful to their health. From my vantage view, I concur with the latter groups and believe that watching television may cause harm to children, simultaneously, it may distract children from doing their home works.
The first exquisite point to be mentioned is that children who watch television for a long period of time may have some health problems. Although watching television do entertain kids, it may have an adverse effect on their health. A vivid example to shed light on what was elaborated above is the sedentary life style that children develop after watching TV for a long period of time. They become less active, ultimately this leads to obesity which is bad for the health.
The second point which deserves some words is that watching television distracts children from doing their home work. children who develop this habit may not focus well in studies, thus fail in their exams. For instance, the latest reported score of children showed a remarkable decline, the teachers attributed this decline to lack of focus caused by television distraction.
Although the aforementioned reasons are fist to cross my mind at a glance, they are by no means the only reasons available. In fact, there is another subtle point. The noteworthy, refreshing, intelligible statistics published in children Heath Journal. The study reviled that watching television may lead to the development of attentive deficit syndrome. A type of disease which could affect the intelligence capabilities of children. The study was performed on 120 children from different school to prevent bias.
To wrap up, contemplating the aforementioned reasons, one's soon realizes that children could be adversely affected by watching television. Thus, it is the parents show watch for the adverse health consequences and limit their children from this bad habit.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, may, second, so, thus, well, for instance, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 13.8261648746 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 43.0788530466 63% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 52.1666666667 79% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1840.0 1977.66487455 93% => OK
No of words: 348.0 407.700716846 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28735632184 4.8611393121 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31911543099 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80379675769 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 212.727598566 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.543103448276 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 543.6 618.680645161 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 10.0 3.08781362007 324% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.8833433809 48.9658058833 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.8421052632 100.406767564 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3157894737 20.6045352989 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.94736842105 5.45110844103 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 11.8709677419 25% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 13.0 3.85842293907 337% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.348359567509 0.236089414692 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117001320127 0.076458572812 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0678553415059 0.0737576698707 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.214872480798 0.150856017488 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0545731889749 0.0645574589148 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 11.7677419355 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 10.9000537634 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 86.8835125448 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.