do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The government should spend more money on improving access to the internet than on public transportation.
By the start of the New Year, governments have to prepare the country’s budget, which allocates each ministry's budget. Hence, they have a heated debate on allocating money to public transportation or internet expansion. In my opinion, public transportation has a crucial effect on our lives because it affects directly health, environment, and family communication. In this regard, I think public transportation is more deserved to have a higher budget in comparison to the internet.
Firstly, by the growth of the human population, cities face a critical air pollution issue. Today, different methods are known as cures of air pollution, but public transportation is the best; because it not only transports a huge number of passengers but also it spends lower fuel. Air pollution causes many diseases, and public transportation by decreasing it avoids respiratory diseases on humans, so people would have better health, and their expanse for curing would be reduced.
Secondly, people due to their income choose transportation type, and usually poor people because of their low income have to choose public transportation such as subway and buses; if numbers of the public transportation decreased, poor people's balance between income and expanse would be eliminated, so they would have to rebalance their budget by working for longer hours. Both anxiety and tiredness are the results of long-time work. In this regard, they would face psychological diseases and spread in society.
Finally, by population explosion in big cities, we face heavy traffic flow which is durable for days. Although people need to spend time with their friends and family members, they usually get stuck in heavy traffic which is the result of public transportation's shortage. People by using public transportation not only eliminate anxiety but also save time to be happy beside their family members.
To sum up, because of public transportation's advantages such as health improvement, money deposits, and a better environment; I highly recommend it to governments to allocate more budget to it, to have fresh air conditions and happier people.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 247, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'transportations'' or 'transportation's'?
Suggestion: transportations'; transportation's
...y traffic which is the result of public transportations shortage. People by using public transp...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, hence, if, second, secondly, so, i think, such as, in my opinion, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.0286738351 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 43.0788530466 53% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 52.1666666667 82% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.0752688172 235% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1808.0 1977.66487455 91% => OK
No of words: 334.0 407.700716846 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.41317365269 4.8611393121 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27500489853 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06168431764 2.67179642975 115% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 212.727598566 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.541916167665 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 558.0 618.680645161 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.86738351254 321% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 78.8166303802 48.9658058833 161% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.142857143 100.406767564 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8571428571 20.6045352989 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.92857142857 5.45110844103 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178684635355 0.236089414692 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0693633428914 0.076458572812 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0581242279221 0.0737576698707 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110869367768 0.150856017488 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.039462759013 0.0645574589148 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 11.7677419355 136% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 58.1214874552 68% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.1575268817 132% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.39 10.9000537634 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.08 8.01818996416 113% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 86.8835125448 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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