There are numerous aspects that governments deal with to improve social quality in communities. Social health is one of the prominent issues, which influences people in societies. In my opinion, officials ought to allocate more budget to support sports than arts. I feel this way for two main reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
To begin with, physical activities improve spirit among the crowd, which bring about more productivity in society. Numerous researches have shown that activities such as running and exercising help the brain secretes chemical proteins causing happiness in people. These chemical materials in the brain are closely related to the sense of happiness in life. People who feel happy in their life, consequently try to do their work better and more efficiently. As a result, societies benefit from more productivity of happy residents. For instance, five years ago when I was at university, I had a problem finishing my paper, for I could not focus on the subject. My professor suggested me going to the gym and exercising every day after my classes. After a while, that exercise gave rise to improving my spirit and helped me focus on my paper. Not only that, I built a fit body. Had not I done those activities, I could not have finished my assignment.
Secondly, support of athletics by the government raises social health quality among residents, which causes many profits in societies. Undoubtedly, people who sport every day have a healthy body, which means they have long longevity. The healthier, the stronger the family can be. In this regard, the medical expense of the government could diminish because the people will be healthier. My personal experience is a compelling example of this. Ten years ago, I was studying hard at my college in other to be an important person in my society. I thought being professional would be enough to have a beneficial life. I was wrong because I did not pay attention to my body and physical health that plays a prominent role in everybody’s life. After a while, I was dealing with many diseases caused by obesity. I could not pass my exams, but also I spent my saving to cure my disease. If I had had exercise, I would have been happier.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, if, second, secondly, so, while, for instance, i feel, such as, as a result, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 43.0788530466 107% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 52.1666666667 92% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1855.0 1977.66487455 94% => OK
No of words: 380.0 407.700716846 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88157894737 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41515443553 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7683147368 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 212.727598566 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.560526315789 0.524837075471 107% => OK
syllable_count: 594.9 618.680645161 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.5240694666 48.9658058833 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 74.2 100.406767564 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2 20.6045352989 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.2 5.45110844103 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 11.8709677419 152% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0808183482106 0.236089414692 34% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0240870796131 0.076458572812 32% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0386547207608 0.0737576698707 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0685515724916 0.150856017488 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0352964112148 0.0645574589148 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 11.7677419355 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.43 10.9000537634 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 86.8835125448 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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