Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Governments should spend more money in support of the arts than in support of athletics such as state-sponsored Olympic teams. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
In my opinion, the government should spend more money in support of athletics. The returns of investment on the sport are much more than art. I addition, supporting athletics and sports teams are more exciting and attractive for young people and increase the willingness to exercise and workout programs in the society.
First, the government annually allocate specific budgets to several sections especially the sports section. However, this section may have considerable returns in comparison to the other sections like the art section. Since numerous tournaments are held throughout the year and in each of the tournaments many prizes are awarded to athletics, the prizes and cups could be a major source of national income in a country. there are several examples to prove this idea. The U.S. and China are usually are ranked as first and second countries in the Olympic games. My country in Asia also take part in the Olympics and also Asian games and the athletics usually win a lot of individual and group prizes. In each case, the government who finance the athletics are the beneficiary section and acquire the returns of the investment. On the contrary, the art section is not a valuable source when in a dollars and cents viewpoint. That is because many people are not interested in artistic creations and market is rarely profitable in museums or art auctions.
Second, the sports section is an exciting section for a large proportion of the people in most countries. People usually investigate the national teams' situations and news and are concerned about the succeeding of their national team. For example, the when the Soccer National Team of Iran was attending in Russia for the 2018 Football World Cup, many people in Iran were just talking about the winning of the national team. Another example is the Olympic games and continental games in each continent. People count the medals and prizes and hope that their country acquires a good rank in the Olympic. All the accomplishments are only possible through the support of the government. By contrast, nobody usually asks about the art section or art museums and actually few people are concerned about the art.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 420, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: There
...source of national income in a country. there are several examples to prove this idea...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, first, however, if, may, second, so, for example, talking about, in my opinion, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 13.8261648746 159% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 43.0788530466 21% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 52.1666666667 86% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.0752688172 211% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1821.0 1977.66487455 92% => OK
No of words: 362.0 407.700716846 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03038674033 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36191444098 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66181544043 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.502762430939 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 569.7 618.680645161 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 9.0 3.08781362007 291% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.1366778469 48.9658058833 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.8421052632 100.406767564 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0526315789 20.6045352989 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.84210526316 5.45110844103 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.15070861134 0.236089414692 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0554623352416 0.076458572812 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0704876397249 0.0737576698707 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134975953427 0.150856017488 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0977398617718 0.0645574589148 151% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 11.7677419355 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 10.9000537634 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.01818996416 106% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 86.8835125448 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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