Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? With the help of technology, students nowadays can learn more information and learn it more quickly. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Thinking about technologies and they help students can give us some important results. First of all, we have to distinguish which technology can help which one does not help. I want to talk about some technologies that they are high value.
To begin with, the computer is one of the important technology that invented by humankind. these days with a computer, not only can we analysis faster than past but also our analysis has more precise. the computer is used in many fields, so students studying in the university can use the computer for their fields.
In the other hand, if I consider the issue from another angle, I can mention some disadvantages of a computer. For example, some students use a computer for playing a game that most of the time they become addict to the computer.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, for example, first of all, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 15.1003584229 20% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 13.8261648746 14% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 43.0788530466 35% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 52.1666666667 35% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 658.0 1977.66487455 33% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 138.0 407.700716846 34% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.76811594203 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.42743929552 4.48103885553 76% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63919370552 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 86.0 212.727598566 40% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.623188405797 0.524837075471 119% => OK
syllable_count: 209.7 618.680645161 34% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 20.6003584229 39% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 17.325919889 48.9658058833 35% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 82.25 100.406767564 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.25 20.6045352989 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.25 5.45110844103 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.148677125887 0.236089414692 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0629022933626 0.076458572812 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.035233783921 0.0737576698707 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.095232330856 0.150856017488 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0456959729602 0.0645574589148 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 11.7677419355 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.09 10.9000537634 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.0 8.01818996416 87% => OK
difficult_words: 22.0 86.8835125448 25% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 40.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 12.0 Out of 30
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