High school is an important period for a student's life. I agree that High schools should allow students to study the courses that students want to study. I have two reasons for this statement.
Firstly, students could be provided an opportunity to acknowledge their interest. Students nowadays spend a hard time finding their interest in something. Therefore, allowing students to have a choice of their own courses to study could help students to find what they want to pursue in the future. Recognizing what their interest is, helps students to structure their dream. For example, my friend’s brother found interest in the engineering subject during his high school years. He now became an engineer working for the Benz company.
Secondly, students could spend more time on their talented subject. People have different strengths in different subjects. Some people are more talented on a certain subject than others. When high schools allow students to select subjects then they could focus on their strong subjects. Developing higher understanding for their strong subjects. FOr example, a student who wants to become an artist does not necessarily need to study mathematics for improvement in artistic ability. For time used for mathematics can be rather used to sharpen his artistic ability.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 42, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'students'' or 'student's'?
Suggestion: students'; student's
...igh school is an important period for a students life. I agree that High schools should ...
^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 188, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “When” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ented on a certain subject than others. When high schools allow students to select s...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 15.1003584229 33% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 0.0 13.8261648746 0% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 43.0788530466 44% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 52.1666666667 42% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1097.0 1977.66487455 55% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 206.0 407.700716846 51% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32524271845 4.8611393121 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78849575616 4.48103885553 85% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66853009719 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 212.727598566 55% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.563106796117 0.524837075471 107% => OK
syllable_count: 320.4 618.680645161 52% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.94265232975 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 12.0 20.1344086022 60% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.6628434345 48.9658058833 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 68.5625 100.406767564 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.875 20.6045352989 62% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.375 5.45110844103 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.269313376557 0.236089414692 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103644317473 0.076458572812 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.130687822519 0.0737576698707 177% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.245785264403 0.150856017488 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.136402649084 0.0645574589148 211% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 11.7677419355 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.3 58.1214874552 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.1575268817 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.75 10.9000537634 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.53 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 86.8835125448 49% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.0537634409 68% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 42, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'students'' or 'student's'?
Suggestion: students'; student's
...igh school is an important period for a students life. I agree that High schools should ...
^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 188, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “When” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ented on a certain subject than others. When high schools allow students to select s...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 15.1003584229 33% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 0.0 13.8261648746 0% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 43.0788530466 44% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 52.1666666667 42% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1097.0 1977.66487455 55% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 206.0 407.700716846 51% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32524271845 4.8611393121 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78849575616 4.48103885553 85% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66853009719 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 212.727598566 55% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.563106796117 0.524837075471 107% => OK
syllable_count: 320.4 618.680645161 52% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.94265232975 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 12.0 20.1344086022 60% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.6628434345 48.9658058833 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 68.5625 100.406767564 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.875 20.6045352989 62% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.375 5.45110844103 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.269313376557 0.236089414692 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103644317473 0.076458572812 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.130687822519 0.0737576698707 177% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.245785264403 0.150856017488 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.136402649084 0.0645574589148 211% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 11.7677419355 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.3 58.1214874552 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.1575268817 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.75 10.9000537634 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.53 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 86.8835125448 49% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.0537634409 68% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.