I agree with the following statement Human activity is making the earth a worse place to live. Because we human beings have created many convenient things and made our life better, but they made the environment of the earth worse. For example, many things we human beings have ever created discharges carbon dioxide, and causes global warming.
From the start of 19th century, the temperature of the earth have increased. Others, we do deforestation to improve industry, cause the air and water pollution, and break the ozone layer, and so on. For these reasons, I agree with the following statement Human activity is making the earth a worse place to live. Not to make the environment of the earth worse, we should reduce the amount of the load to the earth. For example, when we go to the supermarket, we should bring the eco bag. Others, we don't leave the food and drink, we use the hybrid car, and we reduce the amount of energy in a day, and so on. If we do these things, I think the environment of the earth will be better. We should think about what we can do,
and put it into practice.
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Essay reference notes: This topic is refereed from another essay topic, developed by user: MOHD ARAFAT
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
...the earth a worse place to live. Because we human beings have created many conven...
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...r. We should think about what we can do, and put it into practice.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, for example, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 15.1003584229 20% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 11.0286738351 9% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 43.0788530466 46% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 52.1666666667 40% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 898.0 1977.66487455 45% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 199.0 407.700716846 49% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.51256281407 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75589349951 4.48103885553 84% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41617112013 2.67179642975 90% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 212.727598566 48% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.517587939698 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 280.8 618.680645161 45% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 7.0 1.86738351254 375% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 20.6003584229 53% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 22.716724825 48.9658058833 46% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 81.6363636364 100.406767564 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0909090909 20.6045352989 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 5.45110844103 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.238324312077 0.236089414692 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.133744471101 0.076458572812 175% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.195107004797 0.0737576698707 265% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140715203248 0.150856017488 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.102216240578 0.0645574589148 158% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 11.7677419355 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 58.1214874552 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.1575268817 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.58 10.9000537634 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.07 8.01818996416 88% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 86.8835125448 37% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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