Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Human activity is making the earth a worse place to live. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Most people believe that human activities have not affected Earth's ecosystem. In fact, they have closed their eyes to all damages that humans caused, and they just care about increasing the quality of their lives. However, personally, I believe that human activities make this planet the worst place for living. I feel this way for two reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
To begin with, although the advances in technology have many positive results, the tendency of humans to have more power and make everything to serve for their enjoy causes many damages in the environments. For instance, global warming is a result of increasing the amount of dangerous gases emissions such as carbon dioxide and methane. Recent research has shown that the air pollutions of urban areas have been increased during the recent twenty years, and it is a time to worry about it. The humans' activities like industrial factories and cutting trees are just pieces of evidence of these damages and are hard, even impossible, to recover.
Furthermore, extinctions in many species of animals and plants are the results of human activities. Humans destroyed a lot of forests to build roads, cities, and factories. They do not care about anything, especially the lives of other creatures. For example, increasing the pollutions in oceans causes many species of fish to be extinct. Moreover, governments that have the main role in controlling and trying to cease these activities just close their eyes, and the only thing that is important to them is the increasing amount of incomings of their countries. Therefore, there is no hope that in the future, we can repair these catastrophes.
In conclusion, I totally believe that human activities make our world not a good place to live. Unfortunately, although we have no other places to live, we still do not care about Earth's situation. I would therefore recommend people to learn more about our mother planet and try to recover from our mistakes.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, moreover, so, still, therefore, for example, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, in fact, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 43.0788530466 81% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1665.0 1977.66487455 84% => OK
No of words: 330.0 407.700716846 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04545454545 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26214759535 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68934741744 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 212.727598566 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.545454545455 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 527.4 618.680645161 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.9250698885 48.9658058833 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.9411764706 100.406767564 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4117647059 20.6045352989 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.94117647059 5.45110844103 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.85842293907 207% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.158712158107 0.236089414692 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0563833906684 0.076458572812 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0582693578579 0.0737576698707 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105048331868 0.150856017488 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0418995291916 0.0645574589148 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 11.7677419355 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 10.9000537634 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.01818996416 107% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 86.8835125448 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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