Job selection plays a significant role in the individual’s life for its wide influence on your financial condition, social communication, work activity and so on. Generally, there are two options lied ahead: taking the secure job or waiting for a better one. It is not uncommon that the majority invariably overlook opportunities which they can effortlessly take, but pay immense attention to so-called mirage. Great chances are that these risk-takers are in vain in the end. Apparently, the above is more sensible and feasible.
Indeed, chasing for the more satisfying job, if successes, would benefit you in terms of comfortable office environment, high-level wages and friendly colleagues. As an old saying goes, the desire to look attractive is universal. As is common sense, high rewards accompany potential huge amounts of risk which are heavily underestimated or neglected. What if you fail to get the job? What if the job is totally different from which you imagine? Moreover, without a secure job, you are hardly in full preparation for the more satisfying one.
A secure employment would provide you with stable financial resource which could improve your happiness. Working income, with on doubt, is the main security for a family. However, once you give up the possible job opportunities to wait for a more satisfying one, you not only put yourself at high risk but also involve your family members in to share the risk. To address this issue, a steady work should always be given the priority. Waiting, sometimes is wasting time and is harmful for your mental and physical health at the same time. Endless anxiety and stress in the period of waiting for a better job opportunity would cause damage to your body. Moreover, the negative feelings may convey to your friends and family members as well, which adds the unnecessary burden to them.
In addition, taking a stable work opportunity is the first stage to step into the target of obtaining a more satisfying job in the future. Seizing the opportunity of a secure employment is an effective means to detach from potential risk, on the other hand, is also a pathway to increase the possibility of access to a satisfying job. By learning and practicing in your current job, you will accumulate abundant work experience, which lay a solid foundation for next one which suits you.
To sum up, based on the secure job's advantages mentioned above, I firmly draw the conclusion that instead of waiting for a wanted job, people are supposed to focus on the secure work opportunity.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, but, first, however, if, look, may, moreover, so, well, in addition, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 43.0788530466 63% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2136.0 1977.66487455 108% => OK
No of words: 424.0 407.700716846 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03773584906 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.53775939005 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84670886024 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 242.0 212.727598566 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.570754716981 0.524837075471 109% => OK
syllable_count: 684.9 618.680645161 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.0612556798 48.9658058833 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.0909090909 100.406767564 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2727272727 20.6045352989 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.22727272727 5.45110844103 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.325551884776 0.236089414692 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0979989595859 0.076458572812 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0621587753978 0.0737576698707 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.191334312216 0.150856017488 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0275164725805 0.0645574589148 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 11.7677419355 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 10.9000537634 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.01818996416 108% => OK
difficult_words: 110.0 86.8835125448 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.