In this modern era, the world has become more competitive and there is limited job opportunities in the country. Although, some may support the idea of waiting for a better job which is satisfying. However, i personally champion the idea and this essay will explain why.
First of all, people will gain work experience when they take the opportunities. When people grab those opportunities without waiting for second best option, they will earn some money even it is not so impressive and lead to gain some working experience which will be helping in the later stage. As nowadays, to get job, we need to fulfill some criteria like work experience certificate. So if people fails to meet this conditions, people will not get any job. Mean while if the persons happens to get better job, they can go for it. My own experience is a compelling example to what i mean. After graduation from university, i got a offer in one of the banking institute in my country and i took the opportunity without repudiating it. With this i got some working experience and it was easy to get shortlisted in any job with experience. Later, i got better job in other organization with attractive salary and then i left the job. Therefore, instead of waiting for a second chance, it is better to try and grab the opportunity where people will secure experience in the filed.
Second, not only a working experience but also people will know how to interact with their colleague and their customer. Even though the chances of getting better job can be speculated but people will not get a such golden opportunity to learn valuable lesson related to interaction. For instance, my sister is currently working at one of the financial institution and she said due to lack of her prior experience, she is facing challenges in dealing with people and their coworker. As a result, she regrets of not taking opportunity and she advice me and other friends about prospect of gain knowledge and experience in life.
In conclusion, i agree with the idea of taking opportunities right away without waiting for better one because they will gain work experience and moreover, they will know how to deal and interact with people and coworkers.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, moreover, second, so, then, therefore, while, for instance, i mean, in conclusion, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 36.0 43.0788530466 84% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.0752688172 198% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1835.0 1977.66487455 93% => OK
No of words: 380.0 407.700716846 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82894736842 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41515443553 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77895110646 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.484210526316 0.524837075471 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 579.6 618.680645161 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.7350076672 48.9658058833 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.944444444 100.406767564 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1111111111 20.6045352989 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 5.45110844103 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.5376344086 253% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.253098969021 0.236089414692 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0925268545214 0.076458572812 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0518618548416 0.0737576698707 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.169701406441 0.150856017488 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0390491535369 0.0645574589148 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 11.7677419355 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 10.9000537634 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.59 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 86.8835125448 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 65.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 19.5 Out of 30
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