Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? To improve the quality of education, universities should spend more money on salaries for university professors. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Universities are always trying to improve their educational standards. One of the fundamental aspects that any university requires is excellent faculties which will certainly need enough funding. For this reason, I strongly believe that professors should be paid high salaries.
To begin with, it is very important that university professors are earning enough wage. As when they are satisfied financially they can give their best effort toward their students. In another world, when professors are making enough money they do not have to worry about finding another job to cover all their expenses. Therefore, all of their energy and effort are put in their teaching skills. Now when students are performing great in school thanks to their professors, that will be very beneficial to the school itself, and of course to the faculty and the students.
Moreover, when a well_known university pays its faculty good salaries, it will attract many highly qualified and experienced professors and that will take the school to a higher level of educational standards. One example that I can demonstrate on this point is when my school was offered a high fund from the government, the first thing they did was to increase the wage of the professor. After that, there were many well-known qualified professors applying for a job at the school. Within only one semester, the students performance was like never before. Eventually, the school was elected for being one of the best schools in the whole state. Thanks for the high salaries that attracted the best faculty which led to a great students performance.
To sum up, It is very beneficial that universities professors are being paid enough income to increase their efficiency and put their best effort into teaching. Which will help the school as a whole to gain high educational standards.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, as to, of course, to begin with, to sum up

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.0286738351 154% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 43.0788530466 74% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 52.1666666667 67% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1542.0 1977.66487455 78% => OK
No of words: 300.0 407.700716846 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74328270508 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 212.727598566 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.51 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 466.2 618.680645161 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.2702264843 48.9658058833 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.375 100.406767564 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.75 20.6045352989 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.25 5.45110844103 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.101805410636 0.236089414692 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.041229958975 0.076458572812 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0373429618618 0.0737576698707 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0747321740219 0.150856017488 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0445365728851 0.0645574589148 69% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 11.7677419355 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 10.9000537634 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.63 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 86.8835125448 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.

So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:

reasons == advantages or

reasons == disadvantages

for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.


Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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