Education, degree and knowledge are one of the first questions for every employee. Education plays an inevitable role in our future jobs and salaries. Different jobs require different level of specialization and experience and selecting a job as our future occupation is a personal choice and people with different priorities choose different jobs with different prestige.
It happens a lot around us that we hear that a famous company looks for a specialist and an adept person to hire with a high salary. These job positions can be only fulfilled by people who have dedicated their life to a particular field. For instance, if a company looks for a lawyer they don’t care or it is no need for someone that Is also good in mathematics. As we all know being an expert in a field requires lots of energy, dedication and time for gaining experience which isn’t easy and it may most of the time exclude us from learning about other subject. Although, it is absurd to claim that anyone who is specialized in one subject has no information about other fields because most of the fields are connected to each other and sometimes in order to be best in our jobs we find ourselves searching in other areas.
On the other hand, having broad spectrum although expensive, hard to handle and mostly are about jobs with low salary (part time jobs with no restriction for specialty) has benefits as well. Multi task people are like treasure for some jobs and sometimes it is their aptitude for being multi task brings them the opportunity to fit patecular positions that not everyone can. For instance, the ability to socialize with people with variety of majors and fitting the world and the atmosphere around is a key role for a business manager. Furthermore, having knowledge and ability to handle different jobs looks legitimate and can be a guarantee to a person’s future with the depression predominant in countries and worsening conditions.
Ultimately personally talking, I hold this belief that as a teenager people should look into different fields so that they can choose their future major with eyes wide open because imagine wanting to change your field of study or occupation in your late 30s! I simply like to read books and essays about varieties of subjects and gain information superficially about them but this is just a habit for me in my leisure times and I strongly believe that there is nothing significant in obtaining power into all accounts. It is an indispensable fact that more knowledge and information a person has about his/her major the more his/her decisions are rational and more success follows.
In conclusion I may say that free will, talents, varieties of interests and conditions that people are living in can be the prior reasons that someone chooses either be a professional in a specific major or not.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...d mostly are about jobs with low salary part time jobs with no restriction for specialty ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... are rational and more success follows. In conclusion I may say that free will, ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rofessional in a specific major or not.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, look, may, so, well, for instance, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 15.1003584229 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 26.0 13.8261648746 188% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 49.0 43.0788530466 114% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 52.1666666667 113% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2367.0 1977.66487455 120% => OK
No of words: 482.0 407.700716846 118% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91078838174 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.68556276237 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77255825032 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 246.0 212.727598566 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.510373443983 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 762.3 618.680645161 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 20.1344086022 159% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 102.40668381 48.9658058833 209% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 157.8 100.406767564 157% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.1333333333 20.6045352989 156% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.8 5.45110844103 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.108374764007 0.236089414692 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.040417504316 0.076458572812 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0292877792022 0.0737576698707 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0585525139443 0.150856017488 39% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.022586235363 0.0645574589148 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.8 11.7677419355 151% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.0 58.1214874552 67% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 10.1575268817 156% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.79 10.9000537634 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 8.01818996416 108% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 86.8835125448 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.0537634409 147% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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