In the modern era there are lots of academic subject which have their own value and utilizes. having different knowledge about different subject is more precious due to contributing to the societies’ problem. Some people believes that it is useful for countries to have people with many academic subjects. However, others disagree. In my opinion expanding different knowledge and academic subjects have some benefit effect. I feel this way for two reasons which I will explore in the following essay.
First of all, broadcasting academic subjects will give ones to have chance to gain more job opportunity in their future's life. However, it demands enough time to spend for gaining the different subject. what it implies that for gaining different knowledge we should have detail plan which help one to avoid wasting their time and make the most of it more accuracy. although it would be demanding for everyone, it will give you a chance to have more revenue in addition to many job opportunities. One of my own example is a good case in point. it backs to the time that I started my university in management subject. I was feeling that I need to broude my knowledge in the other aspect of business and management therefore I have decided to attend every lecture and conference related to my subject which happen in our university. This circumstances gave me the oppoutunity to broud my academic knowledge in the few time However it was too difficult and breath taking.
Second, having brouder knowledge of different subject could be need able for societies. If a person has different professional skills, he would be much useful for the societies for heling them to solve their problem. For example, imagine a person in a company which studied mathematics and physics simultaneously and a person who studied just one major. comparing this two person show that having two different aspect of a subject play a supplemental role in the professional area which lead the company to have chance of limited problem.
In conclusion, I strongly agree that having broad knowledge of many academic subjects is not only give person to have more job opportunity but also help them to have more revenue Moreover, it would be a chance for societies to have them in their environment as a key one.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, moreover, second, so, therefore, as to, for example, i feel, in addition, in conclusion, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 43.0788530466 102% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 52.1666666667 82% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1911.0 1977.66487455 97% => OK
No of words: 386.0 407.700716846 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95077720207 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43248042346 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79085774449 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.471502590674 0.524837075471 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 623.7 618.680645161 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.1073247263 48.9658058833 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.578947368 100.406767564 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3157894737 20.6045352989 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.73684210526 5.45110844103 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.279214680374 0.236089414692 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0977393351289 0.076458572812 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0642603731727 0.0737576698707 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.199752664077 0.150856017488 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0602461059518 0.0645574589148 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 11.7677419355 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 58.1214874552 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 10.9000537634 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 86.8835125448 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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