People are usually get used to where they lived through out their childhood. Some may state that it is more simple when choose to live an entire life in a place that they have known so well. However, from my perspective, moving from places to places is an interesting way to live a life full of adventures and changings. I share my view with some specific reasons below.
First of all, now in the world, there are more than 120 countries and territories; therefore, it is such a waste that you limit yourself not to discover any of them. For my own experiences, I have just tried to live at 5 different provinces in my country, each for a year, but I find this courage of changing bring me more cons than pros. Although I, sometimes, have to look for new jobs, it is not at all a problem. Moving from places to places provides me chances to get to know new people, for which I met my best soulmate ever. Besides friends, new places are the opportunities for you to learn and acquire the skills to adjust to them. For this reason, I strongly recommend people to alter their living environment.
As I state, new places acquire you a lot to adjust to them, for that reason, you have to change your identity too. Some may dispute that new identities for new places is unacceptable, it is for criminal. However, what I mean here is new places give you a chance to change, or in other words, to break a shell that you accidently built but you no longer want to live with it. For example, people at your hometown feel that you are a silent person who are not so out going and don't usually share thoughts. There must be a reason for why you are so, maybe you and people at your town hardly share same perspectives so you choose to be quiet. Moving to a new place give you opportunities to determine the environment in order to built a self that you think will suit it; rather, that self is who you really are. I, again, for reasons, refer to moving to new places.
Last but not least, there are still controversial opinions on this life style. Some may assert that the life brings too many difficulties and drawbacks for people to face. I refute the point and highly recommend young people to change their environments since you only live once.
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement It is better to live in one town or city all your life than to move from one place to another Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer 70
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement Nowadays parents can learn more from their children than their children can learn from their parents 40
Grammar and spelling errors:
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... environments since you only live once.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, however, if, look, may, really, so, still, therefore, well, for example, i mean, first of all, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 62.0 43.0788530466 144% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 52.1666666667 102% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1833.0 1977.66487455 93% => OK
No of words: 415.0 407.700716846 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.41686746988 4.8611393121 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51348521516 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46424158166 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 212.727598566 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.50843373494 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 574.2 618.680645161 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.8416883435 48.9658058833 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.65 100.406767564 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.75 20.6045352989 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 5.45110844103 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216867123335 0.236089414692 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0730831039922 0.076458572812 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0414706127687 0.0737576698707 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132629912004 0.150856017488 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0498914316864 0.0645574589148 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 11.7677419355 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 58.1214874552 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.36 10.9000537634 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.14 8.01818996416 89% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 86.8835125448 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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