Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is better to make friends with intelligent people than with the people who have a good sense of humor.
In the modern era, a friend has played a prominent role in all societies. Because it is of paramount importance, people have always sought ways to enhance relationships with friends. Whether or not ingenious people are more valuable as a friend or a person who can create a great sense of humor, is controversial. I content that human must choose a friend who has a good sense of humor; thus, I disagree with this proposal. In the following paragraphs, I will delve into the most outstanding reasons.
The first important factor to be mentioned is that friends with a good sense of fun are kind people. To shed more light on this matter, one of the most features of humor people is they are kindly people. Furthermore, friends must be having a kind character. If individuals have kindly friend, they would easily speak with them about all problems and issues. These people spend much time with friends until solve their friend's problems without any expectation. A person who has a good sense of humor tries to make a benefit sense to their friends. They always make some smile on friend's face and become happier their friend. Indeed, having humor sense is more important than having high ingenious rank for selecting friends.
Another reason which deserves some word here is that a person who has a merits sense of fun usually think positively. To shed more light on this matter, one of the most positive of these people is thinking positive. When someone speaks about problems with their friends, their friend would see the positive point of issue. Also, these friends usually find a practical and influential solution for issues. In other words, they think positive, so they can keep calm in all situations; hence, they would able to find a beneficial solution. A positive person is a suitable choice for becoming a friend. Because they always see a positive signal to all around and become happy all people who connect with them. However, intelligent people may find a beneficial and practical solution for problems, but they could not keep calm in all situations. Ingenious people usually try to solve problems with their logical and wisdom; thus, they usually ignore the sense of people about problems.
All in all, considering the aforementioned reasons lead us to the conclusion that a person who has a good humor sense is the better choice than an intelligent person for becoming a friend. I believe that these people not only becoming kind but also having positive thinking about all problems. Therefore, they become a good friend.
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- TOEFL T P O 42 - Integrated Writing Task 80
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 184, Rule ID: WHETHER[7]
Message: Perhaps you can shorten this phrase to just 'Whether'. It is correct though if you mean 'regardless of whether'.
Suggestion: Whether
... to enhance relationships with friends. Whether or not ingenious people are more valuable as a...
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Line 9, column 286, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'friended'.
Suggestion: friended
...d character. If individuals have kindly friend, they would easily speak with them abou...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, hence, however, if, may, so, therefore, thus, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 43.0788530466 84% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2143.0 1977.66487455 108% => OK
No of words: 431.0 407.700716846 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97215777262 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55637350225 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57358268266 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 212.727598566 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.440835266821 0.524837075471 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 644.4 618.680645161 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.2986732383 48.9658058833 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.72 100.406767564 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.24 20.6045352989 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.64 5.45110844103 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 24.0 11.8709677419 202% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.381742309656 0.236089414692 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117905167601 0.076458572812 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0730122854304 0.0737576698707 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.271554399565 0.150856017488 180% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0804041354803 0.0645574589148 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 11.7677419355 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.25 10.9000537634 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.08 8.01818996416 88% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 86.8835125448 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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