What is supposed to be the essential element that has a great impact on our living standards? One answer lies in the money we possess. Since every penny ought to be made full use of, a general controversy arises whenever people are deciding where the money should be used. Some people advocate spending money on traveling and vacations, whereas the reverse side holds the opposing viewpoint that money should be saved for the future. As far as I am concerned, spending money for the future is as important as spending money on traveling and vacations.
On the one hand, saving money can help us grapple with the potential crisis in the future. It is undeniable that challenges are continuously emerging during our whole life. For example, when a financial crisis breaks out, money is the prerequisite to the maintenance of our lives, without which we may suffer mentally and physically. If you have enough deposit, you will be granted the competence to handle the potential difficulties and risks in life and the right to say “No” when you need to compromise. In addition, saving money does not mean just putting money into your bank account. We can buy some financial products, such as stocks, and manage our investment more efficiently. A good example of this point is my money management story. After realizing that I always did not have enough money when I needed to tackle some unprecedented need, in my sophomore, I decided to save money for the future and even tried to invest some money into my stock account. Ultimately, I found I this kind of money management makes me capable of dealing with emergencies.
On the other hand, spending money on traveling and vacations is no less important than saving money. Conspicuously, traveling is one of the most efficient ways for us to enlarge our horizons, and vacation is also conducive to unwinding ourselves. To illustrate, for people who travel overseas,
fully immersing themselves in an exotic culture that used to be only learned from books and screens helps them get intimate interactions with the local citizens. For people who take trips within their own nation, it is a blessed opportunity to appreciate the beauty of the magnificent landscapes of various parts of the country, cultivating a sense of both pride and patriotism for their motherland. Thus, it is definitely worthwhile to spend money on traveling and vacation since they help people equip themselves with a comprehensive understanding of the world and take a break from the hustle and bustle of life. Imagine a miser who never spends money on traveling and vacation, viewing them as meaningless things. Although he might have enough deposits for the rest of his life, he still cannot really relax, and the money is nothing more than the number in his bank account and useless paper laying in his wallet.
With the reference to the arguments above, there should be no absolute superiority of either one over the other. People possess the right to decide which one is suitable for them. Consequently, it is reasonable to conclude that saving money is as pivotal as spending money on traveling and vacations.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, if, may, really, so, still, thus, whereas, while, for example, in addition, kind of, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 15.1003584229 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 50.0 43.0788530466 116% => OK
Preposition: 67.0 52.1666666667 128% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2621.0 1977.66487455 133% => OK
No of words: 528.0 407.700716846 130% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96401515152 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.79356345386 4.48103885553 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76088751247 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 278.0 212.727598566 131% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.526515151515 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 831.6 618.680645161 134% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.6898928048 48.9658058833 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.208333333 100.406767564 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 20.6045352989 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.45833333333 5.45110844103 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.408269751559 0.236089414692 173% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.127672884569 0.076458572812 167% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.106306703326 0.0737576698707 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.253477818389 0.150856017488 168% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0463791102738 0.0645574589148 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 11.7677419355 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 58.1214874552 85% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 10.9000537634 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.01818996416 107% => OK
difficult_words: 128.0 86.8835125448 147% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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