Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
It is better to study science in university than to study arts.
Sentiments converge on whether it is better for students to study art rather than study arts in the university. While some people censure formidably this pragmatic, I am in opposition due to the myriad advantages it brings.
To begin with, when studying science, students will have more chances to get jobs after graduating. Many businesses requires candidates to have science certificates to apply for any positions in any field which motivates students to study science in order to have a good life. Moreover, the number of professors who teach science is always higher compared to art professors. This means that people believe science will be easier. The statistic from the government points out that jobs related to science have a high demand compared to the arts, this field lacks of employees. Besides that, the salary which students might get with science major is higher 50 percent than artists.
Another reason why students should choose science as their major is that studying science does not require students to be patient, careful, or have talent in painting. While there are many skills needed to become a good artist, the percentage of people who have these skills is slight. Furthermore, these skills cannot be trained to be better if students do not have genes from a young age; compared to science, students need hard work to study all hypotheses and apply them in the practical. For example, among the school, students who attend to art club is significantly lower than people who join science class. Besides that, studying science brings students a large amount of knowledge to explain the phenomenons in life which might help students in many cases. Take rain shelter as an instance, students will not sit under the trees because the thunder might hit them.
All things considered, there are multiple advantages that students can acquire if they study science rather than arts which hugely support the original statement that it is better for students to study science.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 116, Rule ID: AGREEMENT_SENT_START[1]
Message: You should probably use 'require'.
Suggestion: require
... jobs after graduating. Many businesses requires candidates to have science certificates...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, furthermore, if, moreover, so, while, for example, in many cases, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 13.8261648746 14% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 43.0788530466 46% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.0752688172 223% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1667.0 1977.66487455 84% => OK
No of words: 328.0 407.700716846 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08231707317 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51680660989 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 212.727598566 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.539634146341 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 499.5 618.680645161 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.8756890491 48.9658058833 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.133333333 100.406767564 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8666666667 20.6045352989 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.86666666667 5.45110844103 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.263243708052 0.236089414692 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100674993467 0.076458572812 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0902352596591 0.0737576698707 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.206443242362 0.150856017488 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0500740214347 0.0645574589148 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 11.7677419355 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 10.9000537634 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.86 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 86.8835125448 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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