Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is important to know about events happening around the world, even if it is unlikely that they will affect your daily life.
Knowing about the surrounding is always beneficial in aspects of knowledge, information and help to others. It is good to know what's going on around the world and make yourself up-to-date. I personally, on belief we should know about the events happening around the world. To strengthen my statement I will pinpoint the most outstanding reasons.
First of all, to know about events happens around us make our self ahead from others in this competitive environment. For example a businessman should be updated about the recent technologies to gain plenty amount of profit. A person use latest technology must have decent and elegance output, it fostered customers to attract towards them to get sophisticated result. In other word a person who knows what happens in surrounding will know about the latest and upcoming technology and in advance he can plan how he would implement them to lead the market. A successful person has a quality of having latest information and news.
Secondly I believe, to know about the events happens around the world accelerate our knowledge. For example I play cricket and I am the big follower of cricket as well. Through the media sources I will make myself up dated if any rule of game has been modified, or if any other new kind of cricket material available in market which can strengthen my game. I can imitate the best quality of other players. Knowledge about the events happens in world will provide us healthy matter of talks among the friends. We can discuss the matters if we have prior knowledge about it. If we know the about the incidents happens around the world we can provide our support to effected peoples to overcome from that. For example if we heard about any flood or earthquake we can send helping material to them to overcome their problem.
To wrap it up, People should have knowledge what's new is going on in the world and filter the information which is useful for them and utilize their knowledge to make them ahead in this competitive environment.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: what's
... and help to others. It is good to know whats going on around the world and make your...
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'use the latest'.
Suggestion: use the latest
... gain plenty amount of profit. A person use latest technology must have decent and eleganc...
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'having the latest'.
Suggestion: having the latest
...t. A successful person has a quality of having latest information and news. Secondly I belie...
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Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
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Suggestion: what's
...rap it up, People should have knowledge whats new is going on in the world and filter...
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Discourse Markers used:
['first', 'if', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'then', 'well', 'for example', 'kind of', 'first of all']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.224324324324 0.229887763892 98% => OK
Verbs: 0.172972972973 0.158761421928 109% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0675675675676 0.0866891130778 78% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0216216216216 0.046263068375 47% => Some adverbs wanted.
Pronouns: 0.0945945945946 0.0685040099705 138% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.135135135135 0.118717715034 114% => OK
Participles: 0.0351351351351 0.0351676179071 100% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.64821277013 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0405405405405 0.0309702414327 131% => OK
Particles: 0.00540540540541 0.00188951952338 286% => OK
Determiners: 0.0864864864865 0.0887237588012 97% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0405405405405 0.0209618222197 193% => Less modal verbs wanted (like 'must , shall , will , should , would , can , could , may , and might').
WH_determiners: 0.0135135135135 0.0139019557991 97% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2012.0 2387.08602151 84% => OK
No of words: 345.0 408.028673835 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.83188405797 5.86048508987 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3097767484 4.48200974243 96% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.353623188406 0.338922669872 104% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.257971014493 0.251872472559 102% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.153623188406 0.174417080927 88% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.104347826087 0.112833075102 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64821277013 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 212.727598566 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.486956521739 0.524397521467 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 50.3192917002 59.2087087015 85% => OK
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6684587814 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.1666666667 20.5533526081 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.7078651903 48.84282405 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.777777778 120.699889404 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1666666667 20.5533526081 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.555555555556 0.644075263715 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.54480286738 90% => OK
Readability: 44.9637681159 45.7405998639 98% => OK
Elegance: 1.36448598131 1.45489161554 94% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.33345198255 0.300154397459 111% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.125399981727 0.103427244359 121% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0958826154514 0.0752933317313 127% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.512652876543 0.497263757937 103% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.155970595722 0.151897553556 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.140279261815 0.114077575197 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0809397754984 0.0781384742642 104% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.329326142746 0.336927656856 98% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0448427905979 0.067059652881 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.243395837615 0.210909579961 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.086267373506 0.0618886996521 139% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8870967742 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.86379928315 26% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.91756272401 61% => OK
Positive topic words: 10.0 8.42114695341 119% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.4623655914 41% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 2.75985663082 36% => OK
Total topic words: 12.0 13.6433691756 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 61.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.5 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.