Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
It is more enjoyable to have a job where you work only three days a week for long hours than to have a job where you work five days a week for shorter hours.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Nowadays, it is have a big step in the development of society, which is people do not need to work more in the company. Instead, they can develop efficient skills to enhance the productivity of the work. Personally, I believe that it is happier if we only work five days a week for shorter hours rather than in three days with long hours. I feel this way for several reasons which I will explore in the following essay.
To begin with, every people have a limitation in concentration during the work day. Additionally, if people work on office longer, they could probably loss their focus in work time. My personal experience is a compelling example of this. I have worked in an electric company two years a go. They announced a policy that engineer can work more than eight hours a day to the night, so worker can take one more day off in the weekend. We initially happy about that, so almost engineer team chose to work more time and take one day off. However, we just did that in two weeks, because all team member were too tire with this schedual .Thus, our jobs were not complete in time, and the company retract the policy.
Secondly, working in shorter time in the day can increase the free time in the night to hang out with friend as well as spend time for family. To be more specific, people go to work from the morning to the late night can not have time to speed for family. When they come back from work, their wife and kids are go to bed, so the can not talk to them and share the interest story in the work day together. More importantly, having diner with family or hanging out with friend usually hapend at night, that time is can not appear if they work late. This time is the opportunity to enhance the relationship between family member and friends. Accordingly, working late will negative effect the social life of worker.
Moreover, taking day off too much can make worker more lazy in the begin of next week. For instance, I had four days off in the national holiday last month. I spend this time with family to a long trip. It took a lot of my energy and made me tired when I came back to work in the Monday morning. My productivity in next week is extremely decrease. As a result I did not finish my jobs in the week in time.
In conclusion, I strongly feel that it much better to work in short hours. This is because it help increase the focus in day work, spend time at night for family and friends, and get ready in the next week efficiently.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'had'.
Suggestion: had
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Message: Did you mean 'to tire'?
Suggestion: to tire
...two weeks, because all team member were too tire with this schedual .Thus, our jobs were...
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'tired'.
Suggestion: tired
...weeks, because all team member were too tire with this schedual .Thus, our jobs were...
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Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Thus
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'gone'.
Suggestion: gone
...back from work, their wife and kids are go to bed, so the can not talk to them and...
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Suggestion: decreased
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Message: Did you mean 'helps'?
Suggestion: helps
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, thus, well, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, in short, as a result, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 43.0788530466 100% => OK
Preposition: 68.0 52.1666666667 130% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2020.0 1977.66487455 102% => OK
No of words: 463.0 407.700716846 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.36285097192 4.8611393121 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.63868890866 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31722787762 2.67179642975 87% => OK
Unique words: 220.0 212.727598566 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.475161987041 0.524837075471 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 637.2 618.680645161 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 20.0 9.59856630824 208% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.5794547457 48.9658058833 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.8 100.406767564 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.52 20.6045352989 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.2 5.45110844103 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.5376344086 181% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.314775271464 0.236089414692 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.096943578466 0.076458572812 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0716333804188 0.0737576698707 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.202503596116 0.150856017488 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0710564890476 0.0645574589148 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 11.7677419355 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 58.1214874552 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.1575268817 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.01 10.9000537634 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.75 8.01818996416 84% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 86.8835125448 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.