Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
It is more important for governments to spend money to improve Internet access than to improve public transportation.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Without a doubt, wise management of resources is the mainstay component to successfully running a country. This entails many tough decisions to be made for eaxample whether it is more important for governments to spend money on internet access or public transportaion. While both are extremely crucial for a sustained progress of a country, if a firm decision has to be made, improving the internet access is more beneficial due to the dependence of economy on the internet and the consequent reduction in transportational needs of a country where internet access is highly avanced.
The first and foremost reason regarding the importance of wide internet access lies in its significance in the economy. Almost every company nowadays is dependent on the internet. Every corporation that helps build the economy of a country is unable to function without having online records of their interactions with their custumers, contractors, and employees. Online transactions in the most franatic manner shape up the biggest trades of all times in stock markets that every millisecond determines their profit or loss. Nonetheless, when we speak of internet based companies, people tend to think of giant companies while many small businesses sell their items on the internet and are able to make ends meet thanks to the market that has become available online. Internet websites have connected these small businesses with their faraway customers. Otherwise, they could find only limited, if any, local customers to whom they sold their products and services.
Another subtle noteworthy matter is that a cheap, high quality, and available internet acess eliminates the need for many transportations in a country. The majority of the need for public transportation is for commuting to work or have to do with beaurucratic processes. However, many jobs that are done in the office are easily doable at home, given a relyable and affordable internet access, and do not require presence of workers in the office. Similarly, many of the beaurucratic processes, opening a bank acount for instance, can be performed withouy having to go outside of the home. This claims became approved during the Covid outbreak, when many of the jobs that previously had strict rules regarding the presence in the office, had to try working from home and did not suffer any reduction in revenue or employee performance. Many school classes even were held online and people did totally fine with having to stay at home. Without adequate internet-related infrastructure, however, none of this triumphs were possible.
In conclusion, contemplating the cardinal role of the internet in the world economy and its ability to reduce the burden on the public transportation facilities dictates that governments should pay more attention to providing high quality internet access for their citizens. Therefore, it is recommended that policy makers and people of influence take these points into acount and prioritize the advancement in internet related infrastructure over other projects such as public transportation when making decisions about funding allocations.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'sustained progress'.
Suggestion: sustained progress
...n. While both are extremely crucial for a sustained progress of a country, if a firm decision has to...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...gh quality, and available internet acess eliminates the need for many transportat...
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Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...elated infrastructure, however, none of this triumphs were possible. In conclusion,...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, nonetheless, regarding, second, similarly, so, therefore, while, as to, for instance, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 43.0788530466 63% => OK
Preposition: 71.0 52.1666666667 136% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.0752688172 223% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2639.0 1977.66487455 133% => OK
No of words: 490.0 407.700716846 120% => OK
Chars per words: 5.38571428571 4.8611393121 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.70488508055 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01920894561 2.67179642975 113% => OK
Unique words: 274.0 212.727598566 129% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.559183673469 0.524837075471 107% => OK
syllable_count: 846.0 618.680645161 137% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 70.7986885022 48.9658058833 145% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.894736842 100.406767564 138% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.7894736842 20.6045352989 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.73684210526 5.45110844103 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22895544065 0.236089414692 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0702629400739 0.076458572812 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0725888742645 0.0737576698707 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146333851723 0.150856017488 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0663566801546 0.0645574589148 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 11.7677419355 144% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 58.1214874552 65% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.1575268817 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.28 10.9000537634 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.71 8.01818996416 121% => OK
difficult_words: 150.0 86.8835125448 173% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.5 Out of 30
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