Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
It is more important to read or watch news presented by people whose views are different from your own than it is to read or watch news presented by those whose views are similar to your own.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer
With no doubt, people all around the world hold diverse outlooks toward various topics. Some members of society think that they should gain their awareness from the sources that have similar opinions with them, while others feel that it is imperative to know how the opposite sides think and act. As far as I'm concerned, it is more useful to watch and read the news sources related to the other point of views than ours, due to improve our patients and critical thinking.
First and foremost, listening to different opinions could enhance people’s tolerant. As a matter of fact, usually, people carry a preconceived perspective toward various subjects, for their whole lives and they cannot endure any contradictory points of view. Needless to say, being to exposure of opposite viewpoints, people can practice to be more flexible and tolerable. To elaborate this more, my father always, can stand other conflict arguments and opinions. Thanks to watching converse news channels on the TV, he embraces discrepancies heard and seen by others. This example demonstrates how watching and reading the opposite-side news could be lucrative for becoming patient.
Moreover, gaining a variety of information either from unanimous news channels or contrary ones, people can have an opportunity to provoke their curiosity to search for the real and trustworthy facts. Ultimately, they can change their mindsets and dismiss their prejudiced. For instance, in the last presidential election, I had decided to vote for my candidate. However, after watching various opposed news channels which their contents were about the infractions that my candidate had committed during his lives, I searched for the truth. Consequently, I altered my decision and voted for the opponent. Without watching those channels, I had no chance to find out about the reality.
To recap, I strongly believe that converse opinions are worthwhile to be considered. It can augment our endurance to stand conflicts. Also, it brings about an incitement to search for the truth.
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Suggestion: practice being
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, however, if, look, moreover, so, while, for instance, no doubt, as a matter of fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 36.0 43.0788530466 84% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 52.1666666667 84% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1721.0 1977.66487455 87% => OK
No of words: 325.0 407.700716846 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29538461538 4.8611393121 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78135125306 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.618461538462 0.524837075471 118% => OK
syllable_count: 522.0 618.680645161 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.3587271981 48.9658058833 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.6111111111 100.406767564 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0555555556 20.6045352989 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.11111111111 5.45110844103 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16943661294 0.236089414692 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0484646622568 0.076458572812 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0528201032797 0.0737576698707 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0967424663814 0.150856017488 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0663743081557 0.0645574589148 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 11.7677419355 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.16 10.9000537634 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.19 8.01818996416 115% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 86.8835125448 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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