Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
It is more important to keep your old friends than it is to make new friends.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
We, human beings, are social creators. I think beyond all kinds of relationships, friendship is much more critical. A man is known by his friends; friends symbolize one's character. Due to this type of relations' importance, some vociferous topics rose to exist. While some people believe that it is better to keep old friends, others consider that new friendships are interesting. In my opinion, maintain old friends do not contradict with found new ones'.
On the one hand, strangers are just friends waiting to happen. Even our most fabulous friends were unknown to us at once. Everybody you meet in your life has the potential to become your friend. New friends bringing their new worldview, broaden our horizons and, generate our mental capacity to overcome life difficulties. There are new topics to discuss, new activities to do together, unique personality traits to discover… while some of our worse encouraging features have become commonplace to our old fellows, they are more observable by new friends.
However, It's an old pro that a friend in need is a friend indeed. We can count on the old friend's support when getting stuck in trouble. They are so reliable and help us even we have nothing to give them back. Old friends know our personality, and they are informed how to behave to alleviate our sadness. For example, when I feel blue, I love to be alone, think about it in my private; it is hard for me to endure others' interference even if they didn't have any kind bad intention; my close friends aware of this and simply they leave me alone to calm down, which it may not right about new friends.
On the other hand, it is impolite to ask for help from someone we recently met. New friends Not only will reject our request, but they may think about us as trouble makers, needy and weak people and decide to broke the relationship at all. This explanation illustrates old friends worse to keep.
In conclusion, there is no dilemma in such a situation as far as I can see. People can keep their old friends because they are most reliable, as well they can make new friends and experience new exciting entertainments, be more praised for those characteristics that old friends became accustomed to, and maybe make some old friend for future.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...maybe make some old friend for future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, so, well, while, for example, i feel, i think, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 52.0 43.0788530466 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1878.0 1977.66487455 95% => OK
No of words: 392.0 407.700716846 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.79081632653 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44960558625 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68855283127 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 222.0 212.727598566 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.566326530612 0.524837075471 108% => OK
syllable_count: 576.0 618.680645161 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 70.3808235066 48.9658058833 144% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.4285714286 100.406767564 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6666666667 20.6045352989 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.57142857143 5.45110844103 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8709677419 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.292525457502 0.236089414692 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0920251583803 0.076458572812 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0798217342028 0.0737576698707 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17329189878 0.150856017488 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0453074129725 0.0645574589148 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 11.7677419355 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 10.9000537634 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.99 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 86.8835125448 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 10.002688172 50% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.