Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
It is more important for governments to spend money to improve Internet access than to improve public transportation.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
It has commonly been assumed that governments should allocate more budget for internet access improvements in comparison with an advancement in public transportation. I totally agree with such a perspective due to the development of technology and current economic climate. There are a number of reasons for each of these ideas around which this essay will revolve.
To begin with, advances in technology play a major role in how governments spend their money. Nowadays, inasmuch as technology is developing expeditiously, many methods and devices have been discovered and invented in order to have a convenient life. In other words, advances in technology have provided people with tremendous comfort and numerous choices such as the internet. In this regard, people can acquire a great deal of information in a split second and perform their tasks easily with the help of the internet. Under these conditions, since technology is enhancing(improve) quickly, governments should spend more money on internet access rather than public transportation in order to follow such fast changes and be more up-to-date society. As an illustration, had it not been for huge a large budget which governments allocate to internet projects, our country could not have conducted the mass-vaccination system for Covid19 treatment online; therefore, since the society should have a long list of impressive accomplishments according to follow changes in technology, they should spend more money on the internet access improvements.
Moreover, another contributing factor which leads governments to pay more attention to improve internet access is the current economic conditions. These days, since many countries are susceptible to the depression, not only is the establishment of a company almost impossible, but also proprietors run their business scarcely. In fact, although there is a fierce competition among rival companies in order to outcompete one another and gain a bigger slice of the pie in a market share, majority of them either operate at a loss or just try to break even. In these circumstances, an increase in unemployment rate causes people to face a great number of financial problems and lose their jobs. To this end, spending more money on the internet access can help governments in order to create more job opportunities in a society and cope with money issues better than spending money on public transportation. For example, had it not been for inaugurating new company worked on the internet, my brother could not find well-paid job after many years; therefore, inasmuch as improvements on the internet access can make more job opportunities in a country, it should be of a great importance for governments to spend on.
In conclusion, because the technology is developing exponentially, government should spend more money on the internet access in order to follow such issues. Furthermore, since allocating more money on the internet access can create a great number of careers in a society and solve people's financial problems, governments should focus on such subject more than the other. Owing to the development of technology and current economic climate, I suggest that governments spend more budget on internet access improvements.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, moreover, second, so, therefore, well, for example, in conclusion, in fact, such as, in other words, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 43.0788530466 53% => OK
Preposition: 80.0 52.1666666667 153% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.0752688172 198% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2747.0 1977.66487455 139% => OK
No of words: 509.0 407.700716846 125% => OK
Chars per words: 5.39685658153 4.8611393121 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.74984508646 4.48103885553 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.14688291405 2.67179642975 118% => OK
Unique words: 238.0 212.727598566 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.467583497053 0.524837075471 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 867.6 618.680645161 140% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 9.0 3.51792114695 256% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 13.0 4.94265232975 263% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 28.0 20.1344086022 139% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 74.5302987522 48.9658058833 152% => OK
Chars per sentence: 152.611111111 100.406767564 152% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.2777777778 20.6045352989 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.88888888889 5.45110844103 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.330186372111 0.236089414692 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116319509525 0.076458572812 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0889963578376 0.0737576698707 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.230057245896 0.150856017488 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.012014681963 0.0645574589148 19% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.1 11.7677419355 154% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.6 58.1214874552 60% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 10.1575268817 152% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.34 10.9000537634 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 8.01818996416 107% => OK
difficult_words: 115.0 86.8835125448 132% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.0537634409 131% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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