There has been a constant drumbeat about whether the internet has more influence than public transportation. Some people believe supporting Internet server have more advantages, others disagree with it. From my perspective, I consider them are equally advantageous to us and I will elaborate in the following paragraphs.
On the one hand, the internet is associated with knowledge sharing. The development of science and technology has come to penetrate all aspects of individuals' life and develop economic growth, and the results above it all because of the widespread of the internet. To illustrate, in early 2021, Oxford University published an investigation about the association between internet equipment development and the index of economic growth. The research demonstrated that cities with widespread internet sever tend to perform better on the economic rate such as Tokyo, London, Taipei, so on. As a result, it's been proved that the internet played a crucial role in the city's development.
On the other hand, a well-developed transportation system is a cornerstone for a society to flourish, in fact, would not only accelerate economic development and strengthen cultural communications. One of the notable cases mentioned, during the first industrial revolution, the first underground metro line was constructed in London which had provided numerous working positions and investment opportunities. With a convenient transportation system, London became a global commercial center. So, funding public transportation is important to a city's improvement.
From what has been discussed above, we can safely draw a conclusion that funding both Internet servers and improving public transportation is equally important to society.
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...crucial role in the citys development. On the other hand, a well-developed tran...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, so, then, well, as to, in fact, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 43.0788530466 28% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 52.1666666667 65% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.0752688172 211% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1484.0 1977.66487455 75% => OK
No of words: 259.0 407.700716846 64% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.72972972973 4.8611393121 118% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.48103885553 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.33212909877 2.67179642975 125% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 212.727598566 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.637065637066 0.524837075471 121% => OK
syllable_count: 468.0 618.680645161 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.51630824373 119% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.5744016784 48.9658058833 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.153846154 100.406767564 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9230769231 20.6045352989 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.30769230769 5.45110844103 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.218313408259 0.236089414692 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0761090885205 0.076458572812 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0544612709134 0.0737576698707 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132253668485 0.150856017488 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0453041226943 0.0645574589148 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 11.7677419355 132% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 58.1214874552 61% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 10.1575268817 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.95 10.9000537634 146% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.19 8.01818996416 127% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 86.8835125448 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.247311828 156% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
More content wanted.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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