Nowadays, people have focused on the problem of project based on whether current days life is easier compared to previous. The problem triggered a hot debate on the internet. From my perspective, I firmly disagree with the idea and I will elaborate on my viewpoint in the following paragraphs.
Admittedly, Some individuals claim that with the development of science and technology, present life is comfortable and convenient, and the quality of physical demand can be satisfied immediately. In contrast, the rapidly advancing information technology can lead to the intrusion of privacy. To be more specific, utilizing online shopping can alongside with high risks at the same time, with technology fraud techniques maintain developing, the consequences of the internet brings can be complex and dangerous.
Moreover, the environmental crisis occurs frequently and on a larger scale. From the beginning of human civilization, mankind stars to use natural resources to generate energy and satisfy its own demands. During the process, the environment has been harmed and damaged and starting to cause consequences. For instance, in early 2020, Oxford University published an investigation topic on the number of environmental events that happened in a certain region in the past decade compared to the previous ten years. The survey indicated that in East Asia, the number of typhoons and tsunamis not only boosted more than in previous decades twice but also destroy a significant of buildings, not to mention the lives that have been taken away. Therefore, the situation of the atmosphere is poorer than in the past.
In addition, overpopulation leads to a competitive society. With more people pursuing a job position, the difficulty of accomplishing the goal that one is dream of increases dramatically. To illustrate, after graduating from college, the younger generation has trouble finding a job not to mention having a career. The unemployed rate maintained on the peek and the government seems can come up with proper measures.
From what has been discussed above, we can safely draw a conclusion that nowadays circumstance is more difficult compared to the past.
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement Life today is easier and more comfortable than it was when your grandparents were children Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer 76
- Essay topics TPO 45 Integrated Writing Task 70
- TPO 39 Independent taskDo you agree or disagree with the following statement In the past it was easier to identify what type of career or job would lead to a secure successful future Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer 76
- TPO32 integrated writing 75
- TPO32 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement Young people today have no influence on the important decisions that determine the future of society as a whole 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 82, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'days'' or 'day's'?
Suggestion: days'; day's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, therefore, for instance, in addition, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 43.0788530466 28% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 52.1666666667 113% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.0752688172 198% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1842.0 1977.66487455 93% => OK
No of words: 341.0 407.700716846 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.40175953079 4.8611393121 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29722995808 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09955276129 2.67179642975 116% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 212.727598566 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.607038123167 0.524837075471 116% => OK
syllable_count: 581.4 618.680645161 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.59856630824 21% => OK
Article: 11.0 3.08781362007 356% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 12.0 4.94265232975 243% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.0683440004 48.9658058833 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.352941176 100.406767564 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0588235294 20.6045352989 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.58823529412 5.45110844103 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.85842293907 233% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.106097892319 0.236089414692 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0278721215586 0.076458572812 36% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0270715967328 0.0737576698707 37% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0528160672652 0.150856017488 35% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0220054627357 0.0645574589148 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 11.7677419355 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 58.1214874552 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.04 10.9000537634 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.32 8.01818996416 129% => OK
difficult_words: 123.0 86.8835125448 142% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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