Nowadays, people have focused on the problem of project based on whether current days life is easier compared to previous. The problem triggered a hot debate on the internet. From my perspective, I firmly disagree with the idea and I will elaborate on my viewpoint in the following paragraphs.
Admittedly, Some individuals claim that with the development of science and technology, present life is comfortable and convenient, and the quality of physical demand can be satisfied immediately. In contrast, the rapidly advancing information technology can lead to the intrusion of privacy. To be more specific, utilizing online shopping can alongside with high risks at the same time, with technology fraud techniques maintain developing, the consequences of the internet brings can be complex and dangerous.
Moreover, the environmental crisis occurs frequently and on a larger scale. From the beginning of human civilization, mankind stars to use natural resources to generate energy and satisfy its own demands. During the process, the environment has been harmed and damaged and starting to cause consequences. For instance, in early 2020, Oxford University published an investigation topic on the number of environmental events that happened in a certain region in the past decade compared to the previous ten years. The survey indicated that in East Asia, the number of typhoons and tsunamis not only boosted more than in previous decades twice but also destroy a significant of buildings, not to mention the lives that have been taken away. Therefore, the situation of the atmosphere is poorer than in the past.
In addition, overpopulation leads to a competitive society. With more people pursuing a job position, the difficulty of accomplishing the goal that one is dream of increases dramatically. To illustrate, after graduating from college, the younger generation has trouble finding a job not to mention having a career. The unemployed rate maintained on the peek and the government seems can come up with proper measures.
From what has been discussed above, we can safely draw a conclusion that nowadays circumstance is more difficult compared to the past.
- TPO47 IndependentDo you agree or disagree with the following statement It is important to know about events happening around the world even if it is unlikely that they will affect your daily life Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer 76
- In the future it may be necessary for us to live on other planets For this reason some people believe that we should spend money now to research other planets such as Mars To what extent do you agree or disagree 78
- TPO46 Integrated In the United States medical information about patients traditionally has been recorded and stored on paper forms However there are efforts to persuade doctors to adopt electronic medical record systems in which information about patie 85
- Successful people try new things and take risks rather than only doing what they already know how to do well 80
- TPO52 Integrated Asteroids are large space objects made of rock and ice There are hundreds of thousands of asteroids in our solar system Though we often hear ideas about establishing colonies of humans to live and work on our Moon or our neighboring pla 80
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 82, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'days'' or 'day's'?
Suggestion: days'; day's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, therefore, for instance, in addition, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 43.0788530466 28% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 52.1666666667 113% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.0752688172 198% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1842.0 1977.66487455 93% => OK
No of words: 341.0 407.700716846 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.40175953079 4.8611393121 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29722995808 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09955276129 2.67179642975 116% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 212.727598566 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.607038123167 0.524837075471 116% => OK
syllable_count: 581.4 618.680645161 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.59856630824 21% => OK
Article: 11.0 3.08781362007 356% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 12.0 4.94265232975 243% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.0683440004 48.9658058833 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.352941176 100.406767564 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0588235294 20.6045352989 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.58823529412 5.45110844103 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.85842293907 233% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.106097892319 0.236089414692 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0278721215586 0.076458572812 36% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0270715967328 0.0737576698707 37% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0528160672652 0.150856017488 35% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0220054627357 0.0645574589148 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 11.7677419355 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 58.1214874552 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.04 10.9000537634 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.32 8.01818996416 129% => OK
difficult_words: 123.0 86.8835125448 142% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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