From the beginning of human civilization, we are on an unstopping journey toward the future, and history always repeats as a circle, Some believe that we can learn lessons from the past and prevent mistakes from happening again. From my perspective, I agree with students should take history courses and I will elaborate in the following paragraphs.
Admittedly, some may concern that adding extra courses will leave an unnecessary burden on students. Moreover, students who are majoring in totally different fields. However, obtaining more pieces of knowledge is always helpful and can push communication to a deeper degree.
First, being familiar with own nation's history helps narrow the conflicts between races. A country is possible consists of different races and cultures which usually leads to serious conflict between races due to a lack of understanding. For instance, in early 2020, Tokyo University published an investigation about the association between the diversity of cultural backgrounds and rates of fights during the colonization of Taiwan in world war 2. Taiwan was officially a territory of Japan Empire, on the contrary, the gap between the government and native citizens still occurred numerable fights. The research demonstrated that if the government spend more time understanding the native culture and history, the results might be totally opposed.
In addition, being aware of other countries' history brings an international view. Not only it is important to know one's own culture, but understanding other nations' history also played a crucial role in being comprehensive. To illustrate, imagine having had a serious business meeting with an overseas client and misrecognizing the person with others who share a similar culture, that would be inappropriate. As a result, having the ability to tell the difference of other cultures is important.
From what has been discussed above, we can safely draw a conclusion that adding history courses is necessary. Not only will benefit the entire society but also the individual's awareness of the globe.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, moreover, so, still, for instance, in addition, as a result, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 43.0788530466 28% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 52.1666666667 84% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1756.0 1977.66487455 89% => OK
No of words: 323.0 407.700716846 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.43653250774 4.8611393121 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98615758685 2.67179642975 112% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 212.727598566 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.613003095975 0.524837075471 117% => OK
syllable_count: 553.5 618.680645161 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.2019598475 48.9658058833 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.75 100.406767564 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1875 20.6045352989 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 5.45110844103 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.132509107206 0.236089414692 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0445989500239 0.076458572812 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0603251997739 0.0737576698707 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0683586889844 0.150856017488 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0314203794149 0.0645574589148 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 11.7677419355 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 58.1214874552 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.27 10.9000537634 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.47 8.01818996416 118% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 86.8835125448 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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