There has been a constant drumbeat about whether it is easier to figure out what kind of career or job would lead to a successful future. From my perspective, I agree with the statement and I will elaborate on my viewpoint in the following paragraphs.
Admittedly, some people will hold the point of view that the present day's job path is not much difficult to identify compared to the past. However, since the industrial revolution, human civilization improves and flourished in a variety of different industries. New job positions are created by new technology constantly. As a result, the current society is with an abounding population and global interaction makes the environment much more complex and competitive.
Moreover, the internet makes modern society more competitive. Compared to the traditional method the approach to knowledge, the internet gives the vast majority access to engage in numerous of information without limitations, this makes the unfilled vacancies harder to acquire due to the reason that people can learn knowledge by themselves. Under the circumstance, choosing a profession difficult decision to make because people may be concerned about being replaced by others in the future.
In addition, the development of technology creates job positions that people could not imagine. Social media connects people around the world and a greatly increased number of them are additive to it, media influencer is a new job that comes with the phenomenon. In early 2020, Oxford University published an investigation associated with what job current children mostly want to pursue a career, with great fortune and famous, media influencers became favorable, such consequence is unpredictable when social media had just been invented. Needless to say, people believe it will become a successful job.
From what has been discussed above, we can safely draw a conclusion that nowadays career paths are more unpredictable compared to the past. Because the complicated and competitive society makes it harder to identify.
- TPO47 IndependentDo you agree or disagree with the following statement It is important to know about events happening around the world even if it is unlikely that they will affect your daily life Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer 76
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement All university students should be required to take basic science courses even if they are not in the career goal 83
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement Because modern life is very complex it is essential for young people to have the ability to plan and organize 70
- TPO32 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement Young people today have no influence on the important decisions that determine the future ofsociety as a whole 76
- TOEFL T P O 43 Integrated Writing Task 3
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, moreover, so, in addition, kind of, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 43.0788530466 39% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 52.1666666667 92% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1732.0 1977.66487455 88% => OK
No of words: 319.0 407.700716846 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.42946708464 4.8611393121 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01360730545 2.67179642975 113% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 212.727598566 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.58934169279 0.524837075471 112% => OK
syllable_count: 549.9 618.680645161 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.4356341929 48.9658058833 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.466666667 100.406767564 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2666666667 20.6045352989 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.33333333333 5.45110844103 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159913824272 0.236089414692 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0500463259508 0.076458572812 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0511793577583 0.0737576698707 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0923529226849 0.150856017488 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0724962641458 0.0645574589148 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 11.7677419355 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 58.1214874552 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.1575268817 125% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.21 10.9000537634 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.88 8.01818996416 123% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 86.8835125448 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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