Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
It is more important to keep your old friends than it is to make new friends
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
This is a rather ambiguous question. On one hand, one should keep old friends due to bonding they already share whereas on the other hand, making new friends increases your network. However, I completely agree that it is more important to keep your old friends than it is to make new friends. The essay constitues of the reasons in order to support the above opinion.
Firstly, the old friends are more valuable than new friends. With new friends, you need to be careful of what you speak, how you behave and need to know the nature of other persons first in order to bond with them. On the contrary, with old friends you share a very strong bond. You have spent most of your time together and already know the nature of them. So you do not have to be formal with them which might be the initial case while making new friends. Not only that, you are already comfortable with your old friends and you can really be yourself without having the fear of being judged which might not be the case while making new friends. Thus, the characteristics like strong bond and being confirtable makes old friends more valuable than new friends.
Secondly, old friends have a lot of great memories to cherish. They can talk about them during reunions. I have already been through this. Once, all of my old, school friends decided to get together after two years. We all were so excited about it. In fact, when we met, we spent considerable amount of time catching up about what they are currently engaged in. However, most of our time was spent reliving the happiest moments of our life and the craziness that we shared. That day we all also realized important are we to each other. Thus, memories are something that can't be quantified as it is priceless.
Lastly, in addition to having strong bonds and great memories, old friends are ready to help whenever there is a situation which requires assistance. It does not matter whether this situation is financial or a fight in a relationship or about one's career, they will always be ready to help and be there for you. That is something that is in short supply nowadays. Furthermore, since you are already comfortable with them, you won't mind sharing theses situations to them which might be difficult in case of new friends. For example, you might be in a fear that other person might take advantage of this situation or might not understand it whereas this is not true for old friends. Instead of this, they will try to provide a plausible solution to the problem. Even though it can not be guarunteed that they will always come up with a solution but they will surely mitigate the problem. For example, they might console you or make you beleive that the problem is solvable.
To conclude, based on the three reasons stated above viz value or importance of having them in your life, memories that you can cherish and their readiness to help without any fear, one can say that it is very important to keep your old friends rather than making new friends.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
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Line 7, column 244, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, lastly, really, second, secondly, so, thus, whereas, while, for example, in addition, in fact, in short, on the contrary, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 34.0 15.1003584229 225% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 9.8082437276 194% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.0286738351 154% => OK
Pronoun: 75.0 43.0788530466 174% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 72.0 52.1666666667 138% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2471.0 1977.66487455 125% => OK
No of words: 534.0 407.700716846 131% => OK
Chars per words: 4.62734082397 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.80712388197 4.48103885553 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36802843514 2.67179642975 89% => OK
Unique words: 230.0 212.727598566 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.430711610487 0.524837075471 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 735.3 618.680645161 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 17.0 9.59856630824 177% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 29.0 20.6003584229 141% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.367162398 48.9658058833 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.2068965517 100.406767564 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4137931034 20.6045352989 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.62068965517 5.45110844103 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 20.0 11.8709677419 168% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.325872430781 0.236089414692 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0976329097463 0.076458572812 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.112023178743 0.0737576698707 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.226683679075 0.150856017488 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.130608782692 0.0645574589148 202% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 11.7677419355 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 58.1214874552 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.1575268817 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.57 10.9000537634 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.89 8.01818996416 86% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 86.8835125448 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 71.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.5 Out of 30
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