Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It's better complete a project and then start another one than to do several things at the same time
These days with develop society people have become more involved as a result, some people believe that doing several projects at the same time is an ability that requires daily life. On the other hand, others don't. In my point of view, finishing one task before moving to another is better than multitasking due to the following reasons.
First of all, it will decrease somebody's stress. When a person finishes one task, he feels happy and satisfied. The achievement of a goal will be enjoyable for a person. In other words, after feeling achievement, a substance is released in the body that slows down a person and declines their stress and anxiety. So that, they will make fewer mistakes and their mind will be free. Also, their creativity will increase and it helps them to have a good performance.
Secondly, it will increase the quality of the f project because they focus on one project and pay attention to the details of the project very much. So that, they finish it. and they can organize tasks as well. It helps them to don't exit from the main route of success and they don’t lose the main goal. Furthermore, their efficiency and their performance boost. researchers have found out that the brain only focuses on one task at a specific time, not more. Because, it hasn't the capacity to perform both tasks at the same time and when they try to do things, the quality of the project is reduced and the brain might be confused.
At last, it will increase the velocity of doing one project. Focusing on one task improves brain function and the brain doesn't distract from the main idea so that, it helps them to finish it quickly. Researchers show that for people who tend to multitask, their brains will slow down. Because the brain cannot filter out irrelevant information and organize its thoughts. Keeping to multiple tasks not only reduce the velocity of doing the project but also, the brain will be damaged
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, well, as a result, first of all, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 43.0788530466 84% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 52.1666666667 75% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1589.0 1977.66487455 80% => OK
No of words: 337.0 407.700716846 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.71513353116 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28457229495 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3863655718 2.67179642975 89% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 212.727598566 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.537091988131 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 484.2 618.680645161 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.7432585277 48.9658058833 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.6666666667 100.406767564 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0476190476 20.6045352989 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.85714285714 5.45110844103 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183895057023 0.236089414692 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.052739817843 0.076458572812 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0746761097077 0.0737576698707 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128859802799 0.150856017488 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0878338480497 0.0645574589148 136% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 11.7677419355 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 58.1214874552 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.1575268817 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.8 10.9000537634 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.52 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 86.8835125448 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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