Life in the past was quite easy but the life we live in today is even easier and more comfortable although most people claim there are more struggles and difficulties in todays world but i totally disagree. Life today is easy.
Talk of the technologies of today, very fascinating, these machines and equipment aid the speed at which work is done, its more faster,easier with very little or no errors unlike the days of our grandparents, carrying out these activities was difficult, technology of this kind didn't exist, they work manually in farms which was lot more stressful, no means of transportation, they travel using horses or camels which is time consuming but today we travel using lot of transportation means like trains, buses ,and aeroplanes that is you can travel to what ever distance you wish and its also time saving.
Moreover, the internet has made life very easy by making us access information of any kind that is aquiring more knowledge than those from the past, It has also brought us closer to our loved ones because communication is made easier, we send emails and text messages which is replied immediately, also with some social application on computers and cell phones we can also make video inference or calls, this way we feel even closer to them, unlike those in the past, they had to use telegrams, send mails through post offices', which could take time before reaching or even getting a reply from their loved ones,besides getting informations was difficult aswell.
In addition, medically, today's life has improved because of newly found remedies on how to take care of several ailments. Also, lot of healthcare centers wthat are able to diagnose and cure lot of diseases has been introduced unlike older days, such opportunities were not available which made them rely more on low quality drugs which increased death rate in the world at that time.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, moreover, so, well, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 43.0788530466 70% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1566.0 1977.66487455 79% => OK
No of words: 319.0 407.700716846 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90909090909 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65884687253 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 212.727598566 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.608150470219 0.524837075471 116% => OK
syllable_count: 497.7 618.680645161 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 20.6003584229 29% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 53.0 20.1344086022 263% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 239.687586013 48.9658058833 489% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 261.0 100.406767564 260% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 53.1666666667 20.6045352989 258% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 9.16666666667 5.45110844103 168% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.5376344086 271% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 11.8709677419 34% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.130463830851 0.236089414692 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0720817408001 0.076458572812 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0438549387371 0.0737576698707 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0860532083529 0.150856017488 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0441889563788 0.0645574589148 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 28.3 11.7677419355 240% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 17.68 58.1214874552 30% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 6.10430107527 213% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 24.0 10.1575268817 236% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.09 10.9000537634 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.37 8.01818996416 129% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 86.8835125448 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 10.002688172 195% => OK
gunning_fog: 23.2 10.0537634409 231% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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