Personally, I agree that always telling the truth is the most important consideration in a relationship between people for reasons such as enhancing trust,promoting love and unity, and improving moral standard of an individual.
Trust,as the name implies,is an important attribute that a person,company or franchise struggles to maintain in order to achieve a desired result or affection from another.For instance, a married couple try to trust the other by being truthful and caring about one another to generate a satiable level of peace and respect in the family. Another instance is a company which strives to build customer's trust by providing quality products,promotional packages,and good customer services, just as they had advertised or promised to also increase business profits, development and growth.
Furthermore, love and unity is universal emotion that reduces hate among people,corruption and poverty.For example,a country free of corruption is possible when there is unity between the government and the people and this is achieved when the government is truthful to the people.Poverty can be eradicated only when the rich,middle class ,and poor people are transparent to the other and this character is promoted when truth telling is observed.
In addition, being honest improves the moral standard of an individual and makes the person socially acceptable.A person who does the opposite is considered selfish and untrustworthy and people tend to stay away from such people.For example, in a residential community, an honest person is easily trusted and receives more rewards and grants from neighbors as a sign of gratitude because they know that the person would never deceive them in any way possible.
These are the reasons why i agree that being honest is the most important consideration in any relationship between people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, so, for example, for instance, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 13.8261648746 145% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 43.0788530466 30% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 52.1666666667 61% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1567.0 1977.66487455 79% => OK
No of words: 286.0 407.700716846 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.47902097902 4.8611393121 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.48103885553 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.23703151446 2.67179642975 121% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 212.727598566 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.583916083916 0.524837075471 111% => OK
syllable_count: 495.0 618.680645161 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.59856630824 21% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 20.6003584229 29% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 47.0 20.1344086022 233% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 120.816320641 48.9658058833 247% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 261.166666667 100.406767564 260% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 47.6666666667 20.6045352989 231% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 12.5 5.45110844103 229% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 22.0 5.5376344086 397% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159319064292 0.236089414692 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112372533934 0.076458572812 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.119205411529 0.0737576698707 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133029835184 0.150856017488 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.12004926574 0.0645574589148 186% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 28.2 11.7677419355 240% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 15.31 58.1214874552 26% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 6.10430107527 239% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 22.8 10.1575268817 224% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 15.39 10.9000537634 141% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.66 8.01818996416 133% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 86.8835125448 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 10.002688172 190% => OK
gunning_fog: 20.8 10.0537634409 207% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 15.0 10.247311828 146% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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