Compared to the grandparents childhood time, in my point of view, there are conspicuous developments and comforts at the moment. What is coming to my mind is that the broad advancements of today, which were not available in the firstly mentioned time, makes the people to have more comfortable and easier lives than it was when my grandparents were children.
First and foremost, technology in advance play the most consequential role in the ease and comforts of lives in today’s communities. As an example, I compare my grandfather's life to my life, narrating one his stories which is applicable here. "It toke three days for me to get to my brother's house which was a village nearby to mine," said my grandfather, " Due to the fact that there was no active transporting system between these two villages, so I to walk all the way." Consequently, the lack of technology caused him to walk this long path. However, an individual can cross the same distance in one and half hour, using transporting systems.
The second noticeable point is that people are more independent today rather than the time while my grandparents were living. From among all the factual anecdotes that I myself heard, I want to mention one of them here. Long time ago, when my grandmother was a teenager, she was under the control of her father and meanwhile brothers. As long as they were illiterate, they did not admit her to go to school and have a degree. The fact is in that time there were some weird traditions preventing the women to study, actually there was not an independent gender by the name of female, as it is not right now. On the contrary of that time, the girls are studying today and doing other tasks that they want and wish. Therefore, life is easier and more comfortable now.
The last reason of the lives easiness and comfortless of today is that today the governments are better adherents of the individuals than they were when my grandparents were children. It was written in my history book that around a hundred years ago, which refers to my grandparents childhood time, the king of Afghanistan, my country, had no curious decisions for increasing the lives of inhabitants. No facilities, no lives constituents, abundant barriers, countless constraints in the era were one the fundamental causes of hardly living. Contrasting to that time, there are accessible life features, less obstacles and no more restrictions at the moment. Resulting to a more advanced and easy life at current time.
To summarize, I agree that life is easier and more comfortable than it was when my grandparents were children. I declared three various reasons for my claim. Firstly, the broad technology, another one is the independence of the current time and finally the governments as better supporters at this time.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 17, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'grandparents'' or 'grandparent's'?
Suggestion: grandparents'; grandparent's
Compared to the grandparents childhood time, in my point of view, th...
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Line 3, column 258, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'tokes'?
Suggestion: tokes
...ries which is applicable here. 'It toke three days for me to get to my brothers...
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Line 3, column 343, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , &apos
...house which was a village nearby to mine,' said my grandfather, ' Due to the...
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Line 7, column 24, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'lives'' or 'life's'?
Suggestion: lives'; life's
...fortable now. The last reason of the lives easiness and comfortless of today is th...
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Line 7, column 605, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun obstacles is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...me, there are accessible life features, less obstacles and no more restrictions at t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, consequently, finally, first, firstly, however, if, second, so, therefore, while, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 32.0 15.1003584229 212% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 9.8082437276 10% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 19.0 11.0286738351 172% => OK
Pronoun: 53.0 43.0788530466 123% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 52.1666666667 100% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2360.0 1977.66487455 119% => OK
No of words: 477.0 407.700716846 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94758909853 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.67336384929 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9371914628 2.67179642975 110% => OK
Unique words: 229.0 212.727598566 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.480083857442 0.524837075471 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 729.9 618.680645161 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 8.0 3.08781362007 259% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.1822042169 48.9658058833 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.380952381 100.406767564 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7142857143 20.6045352989 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.09523809524 5.45110844103 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.273728799854 0.236089414692 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0916693614157 0.076458572812 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.104460702232 0.0737576698707 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1787845912 0.150856017488 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0366338305885 0.0645574589148 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 11.7677419355 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 10.9000537634 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 86.8835125448 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 10.002688172 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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