Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Life today is easier and more comfortable than it was when your grandparents were children.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
As technology keeps developing, our modern life is influenced profoundly. Our experience today is entirely different than our grandparents in the past in so many ways. In my opinion, I believe that our life today is less hard than our grandparent's life. Technology facilitated our life today. besides, the revolution in telecommunication saved our time and effort than in the past, and advancement in the health sector saved many lives and provided prosperous life.
First, technology changed all aspects of our life significantly, as we use it extensively every day. When we compare our kitchen today to our grandparent's kitchen, we can see the enormous advancement that made our life much more comfortable. For example, my kitchen is fully equipped with all kinds of luxurious appliances such as microwave, dishwasher, trash compactors, coffee machines, and more. All these machines facilitate the cooking process and make it time-efficient. On the other hand, my grandmother, when she was a child, her kitchen only had simple and primitive appliances. She has to perform many cooking tasks manually, such as kneading dough, that may take her a whole day to be ready, while my bread machine does the work in less than an hour. Hence, we are enjoying a much comfortable life than they had.
Moreover, The innovation in telecommunication changed the earth's face entirely. We can communicate with our loved ones through the internet daily for free. The internet calls transformed our globe into a small village. We can even have our work meeting virtually 24 hours. That was not the case a hundred years ago when my grandparents were children. For instance, my grandfather's father used to travel when his company has a meeting in the headquarters. At this time, Zoom meetings were not accessible as nowadays. In my case, I can hold a meeting with my team in Japan daily, needless to go anywhere. This is one life aspect that indicates how our grandparent's life was much harder than ours today.
finally, the great advancement in medical science is an excellent criterion of our modern life. health has been improved in so many ways by using modern techniques that were not available before. In the past, people used to die from diseases that used to be incurable, but today these diseases are highly manageable. Therefore people ages extended than before.
In conclusion, I firmly believe that our grandparent's life was harder than ours today because technology facilities our daily tasks such as cooking and also, the vast advancement in telecommunications made it more attainable to reach other people anywhere in the globe than before.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 118, Rule ID: RATHER_THEN[2]
Message: Did you mean 'different 'from''? 'Different than' is often considered colloquial style.
Suggestion: from
... experience today is entirely different than our grandparents in the past in so many...
^^^^
Line 1, column 294, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Besides
... Technology facilitated our life today. besides, the revolution in telecommunication sa...
^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Finally
...ife was much harder than ours today. finally, the great advancement in medical scien...
^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 97, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Health
...excellent criterion of our modern life. health has been improved in so many ways by us...
^^^^^^
Line 7, column 318, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...y these diseases are highly manageable. Therefore people ages extended than before. In c...
^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, finally, first, hence, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, while, as to, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 58.0 43.0788530466 135% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 52.1666666667 82% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2225.0 1977.66487455 113% => OK
No of words: 433.0 407.700716846 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13856812933 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56165014514 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01076088854 2.67179642975 113% => OK
Unique words: 227.0 212.727598566 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.524249422633 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 701.1 618.680645161 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 17.0 9.59856630824 177% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6003584229 126% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 50.2843982768 48.9658058833 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.5769230769 100.406767564 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6538461538 20.6045352989 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.69230769231 5.45110844103 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 14.0 4.88709677419 286% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18513403512 0.236089414692 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0608858786014 0.076458572812 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0482875099926 0.0737576698707 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11820360298 0.150856017488 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0117192150297 0.0645574589148 18% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 11.7677419355 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 58.1214874552 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 10.9000537634 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.93 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 86.8835125448 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 118, Rule ID: RATHER_THEN[2]
Message: Did you mean 'different 'from''? 'Different than' is often considered colloquial style.
Suggestion: from
... experience today is entirely different than our grandparents in the past in so many...
^^^^
Line 1, column 294, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Besides
... Technology facilitated our life today. besides, the revolution in telecommunication sa...
^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Finally
...ife was much harder than ours today. finally, the great advancement in medical scien...
^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 97, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Health
...excellent criterion of our modern life. health has been improved in so many ways by us...
^^^^^^
Line 7, column 318, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...y these diseases are highly manageable. Therefore people ages extended than before. In c...
^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, finally, first, hence, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, while, as to, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 58.0 43.0788530466 135% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 52.1666666667 82% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2225.0 1977.66487455 113% => OK
No of words: 433.0 407.700716846 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13856812933 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56165014514 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01076088854 2.67179642975 113% => OK
Unique words: 227.0 212.727598566 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.524249422633 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 701.1 618.680645161 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 17.0 9.59856630824 177% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6003584229 126% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 50.2843982768 48.9658058833 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.5769230769 100.406767564 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6538461538 20.6045352989 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.69230769231 5.45110844103 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 14.0 4.88709677419 286% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18513403512 0.236089414692 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0608858786014 0.076458572812 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0482875099926 0.0737576698707 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11820360298 0.150856017488 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0117192150297 0.0645574589148 18% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 11.7677419355 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 58.1214874552 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 10.9000537634 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.93 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 86.8835125448 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.