Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Life today is easier and more comfortable than it was when your grandparents were children.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
first of all, getting an education is currently more convenient rather than in past. we have so many options to choose from and also have many transportation options to adjust to life in this world. in the past, they have only one school in that area, or they had to go to another place for higher education. usually, they were gone by walk for a long distance in any weather and school premises is way good compared to that time.
secondly, in the past, parents have many more children so they can't afford everyone's needs separately. so, siblings have to adjust according to the situation. nowadays we have only 2,3 siblings and also incomes are high so parents can easily afford individuals expectations and passion. we can afford our interesting toys, books, and games and don't have to share them with others. for example, I have a hobby of dancing which was actually inspired by my grandmom, she is a very good dancer but due to financial crisis she didn't become a professional dancer, so they teach me when I was a child and now, I have a chance to do practice with my personal trainer. if my grandmom had an opportunity to perform at the national level it will definitely proud moment for her.
finally, we have full facilities to enjoy our childhood rather than our grandparents had. we have more education facilities, and we have a lot of sources to fulfill our desire, our passion, and our dream.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: First
first of all, getting an education is current...
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Message: Did you mean: 'in the past'?
Suggestion: in the past
...s currently more convenient rather than in past. we have so many options to choose from...
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Suggestion: We
...ly more convenient rather than in past. we have so many options to choose from and...
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Suggestion: In
...ptions to adjust to life in this world. in the past, they have only one school in ...
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Suggestion: Usually
... to another place for higher education. usually, they were gone by walk for a long dist...
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Suggestion: Secondly
...s is way good compared to that time. secondly, in the past, parents have many more ch...
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Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...parents have many more children so they cant afford everyones needs separately. so, ...
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Suggestion: So
...cant afford everyones needs separately. so, siblings have to adjust according to t...
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Suggestion: Nowadays
...e to adjust according to the situation. nowadays we have only 2,3 siblings and also inco...
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Suggestion: We
...d individuals expectations and passion. we can afford our interesting toys, books,...
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...nd dont have to share them with others. for example, I have a hobby of dancing whic...
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Suggestion: didn't
... dancer but due to financial crisis she didnt become a professional dancer, so they t...
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...o do practice with my personal trainer. if my grandmom had an opportunity to perfo...
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Suggestion: Finally
...ill definitely proud moment for her. finally, we have full facilities to enjoy our c...
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Suggestion: We
...dhood rather than our grandparents had. we have more education facilities, and we ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, finally, first, if, second, secondly, so, for example, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 15.1003584229 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 43.0788530466 74% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 52.1666666667 61% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1162.0 1977.66487455 59% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 250.0 407.700716846 61% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.648 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 4.48103885553 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61926401877 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 212.727598566 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.524837075471 114% => OK
syllable_count: 371.7 618.680645161 60% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6003584229 58% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.2270683331 48.9658058833 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.8333333333 100.406767564 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8333333333 20.6045352989 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.33333333333 5.45110844103 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 16.0 5.5376344086 289% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0710236193536 0.236089414692 30% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0276531862542 0.076458572812 36% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.025386177213 0.0737576698707 34% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0481703714612 0.150856017488 32% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00971095107895 0.0645574589148 15% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 11.7677419355 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.69 10.9000537634 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.04 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 86.8835125448 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.