Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Living in a city is better than living in a village.
Use specific reason and examples to support your answer.
Living in community is not only a choice for every human stepping on the planet, but also a requirement for them to rise to prominence. Human societies are generally structured in two main parts, cities and villages, and everyone can decide on where he or she wants to live which can bring the most success and inside happiness for them. Germane to this fact, a question which is matter of debate, a controversial one, is whether living in a city is preferred to living in a village or not. Despite this fact that some people might rather to live in a village, I'm personally on the conviction that living in a city can provide me with the best experiences of my life that I can ever have.
As population grows in an area, It can absorb more financial resources which can lead to an advance in recreational equipment and facilities for the people who live there. Therefore in large cities there are many places for having fun with your friends or simply find a place to spend your weekend after a long working week. Large IMAX movie theaters, amusement parks, fantastic concert halls with amazing acoustic features which can make you alive when you listen to a music band after a fast-paced week are the things that bring the most joy and happiness to my heart and I can only find all these facilities in a city. Similarly having a great internet connection which can be found in big urban areas is another significant option that I really love to have in my life. Because of all these facilities which are provided with in big cities I definitely enjoy living in a crowded, big city.
Another point which is equally important for me, if not more, is that living in big cities can provide a lot of opportunities, inter alia occupation, education and health care opportunities stands out the most. To delineate everyone in the world have some purposes and dreams to pursue and with the opportunities which are provided in the cities you can easily achieve them. I've always wanted to become a university professor and for accomplishing that wish I have to live in a city to use educational facilities like universities and tutoring classes if it is necessary and I also need to look for the teaching positions in a city. Furthermore living in a city can provide me with the opportunity of getting to know many new people everyday which can lead me to a better friendship circles and as a result I will have much more relations which is required to find a good occupation as a professor.
Having a more convenient access to brand-new and advanced recreational facilities or better job opportunities is one of the main reasons that I personally like to live in large city. Although some people might prefer to have a quiet and peaceful life in village, the enjoyment of living in a crowded city takes precedence over living in a village in my attitude toward life and happiness. And as a person who lives in a very large city,Tehran, I ,personally, take comfort in that.
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...who lives in a very large city,Tehran, I ,personally, take comfort in that.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'furthermore', 'if', 'look', 'really', 'similarly', 'so', 'therefore', 'as a result']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.225577264654 0.229887763892 98% => OK
Verbs: 0.143872113677 0.158761421928 91% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0817051509769 0.0866891130778 94% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0497335701599 0.046263068375 108% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0515097690941 0.0685040099705 75% => OK
Prepositions: 0.131438721137 0.118717715034 111% => OK
Participles: 0.0319715808171 0.0351676179071 91% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.75425160822 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0408525754885 0.0309702414327 132% => OK
Particles: 0.00177619893428 0.00188951952338 94% => OK
Determiners: 0.104795737123 0.0887237588012 118% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0284191829485 0.0209618222197 136% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0266429840142 0.0139019557991 192% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2974.0 2387.08602151 125% => OK
No of words: 526.0 408.028673835 129% => OK
Chars per words: 5.65399239544 5.86048508987 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.78901763229 4.48200974243 107% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.309885931559 0.338922669872 91% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.212927756654 0.251872472559 85% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.15969581749 0.174417080927 92% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.119771863118 0.112833075102 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75425160822 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 253.0 212.727598566 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.480988593156 0.524397521467 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 56.7071269443 59.2087087015 96% => OK
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6684587814 77% => OK
Sentence length: 32.875 20.5533526081 160% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.8354979512 48.84282405 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 185.875 120.699889404 154% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.875 20.5533526081 160% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.625 0.644075263715 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.54480286738 144% => OK
Readability: 54.1677756654 45.7405998639 118% => OK
Elegance: 1.58695652174 1.45489161554 109% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.397597325288 0.300154397459 132% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.13496898258 0.103427244359 130% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0434702292874 0.0752933317313 58% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.579464925277 0.497263757937 117% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.0801138592404 0.151897553556 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.187796531488 0.114077575197 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0613487290995 0.0781384742642 79% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.464553820523 0.336927656856 138% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0261224003097 0.067059652881 39% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.313258368414 0.210909579961 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0315675016507 0.0618886996521 51% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8870967742 109% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.86379928315 26% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.91756272401 41% => OK
Positive topic words: 11.0 8.42114695341 131% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.4623655914 41% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.75985663082 72% => OK
Total topic words: 14.0 13.6433691756 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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