Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Most advertisements make products seem much better than they really are.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
No one can deny that there are both positive and negative aspects of advertisements. If I were forced to choose, I would definitely say commercials makes goods look better than they appear to be. It is my firm belief that advertisements are embellishing the products for a number of reasons.
To begin with, advertisements often mislead people by its’ eye-catching commercial. To be more specific, most of the advertisements tend to emphasize the good sides of their products and turn a black eye to their down parts. What is worse, viewers of the commercial often lack the wisdom to distinguish what kind of product is good for them and what is bad to them potentially. I have to admit my opinion has been profoundly influenced by my own personal experience. You see, back in the days, I used to be a chubby boy. Once I saw a fat cutting pill being promoted on the television, not only did I pay it right away, but also book doses that I can take it for years. It is the fancy affect that is claimed on its promotion, that I decided to take it, in order to lose weight. However, the consequence of taking uncertificated pills comes right away, side effect of the pills was killing me. Accordingly, if it were not the fancy commercials that mislead me, I would not have hurt my kidney so bad, that I still have severe sequelae today.
Secondly, sometimes manufactures ask people act as their users to help them advertising. This will even be more misleading than exaggerating about the utility of their products, since customers tend to believe in who they share a common point. Drawing on my friend’s experience, he bought a pair of sneaker that is claimed to have to potential to improve your performance on court, by a soccer player. However, it turns out, the manufacture is a fraud, not only did not the sneaker improves his performance, but also the soccer player was not the user of the brand. Moreover, the shoes’ quality is to bad to cost that much money. If it were not the fake user commercial, my friend could save a good amount of money buying a useless product.
All in all, in light of the above mentioned reasons, I strongly believe that advertisements are misleading and makes people feel better about the products. In the reason that many commercials exaggerate their benefits and make fake their users.
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- TPO 48 Integrated Writing Task 80
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- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement Most advertisements make products seem much better than they really are Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer 70
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement Most advertisements make products seem much better than they really are Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer 66
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement Most advertisements make products seem much better than they really are Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer 70
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 55, Rule ID: YOURS_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: An apostrophe is never used to form possessive case pronouns. Did you mean: 'its'?
Suggestion: its
... advertisements often mislead people by its’ eye-catching commercial. To be more spe...
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Line 2, column 685, Rule ID: AFFECT_EFFECT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'effect'?
Suggestion: effect
... can take it for years. It is the fancy affect that is claimed on its promotion, that I dec...
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Line 2, column 828, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'pills'' or 'pill's'?
Suggestion: pills'; pill's
...he consequence of taking uncertificated pills comes right away, side effect of the pi...
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Line 3, column 77, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[9]
Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to advertise' or 'advertise'.
Suggestion: to advertise; advertise
... people act as their users to help them advertising. This will even be more misleading than...
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Line 3, column 598, Rule ID: TO_TOO[5]
Message: Did you mean 'too'?
Suggestion: too
... brand. Moreover, the shoes’ quality is to bad to cost that much money. If it were...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, however, if, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, kind of, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 15.1003584229 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 56.0 43.0788530466 130% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 52.1666666667 100% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1926.0 1977.66487455 97% => OK
No of words: 410.0 407.700716846 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.69756097561 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49982852243 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84842651493 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 229.0 212.727598566 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.558536585366 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 601.2 618.680645161 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.3869360679 48.9658058833 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.3 100.406767564 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5 20.6045352989 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.2 5.45110844103 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.85842293907 233% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.12523286076 0.236089414692 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0362920246396 0.076458572812 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0365349147328 0.0737576698707 50% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.08434166014 0.150856017488 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0277322075167 0.0645574589148 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 11.7677419355 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.98 10.9000537634 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 86.8835125448 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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