Have you ever been in a situation: You are watching your TV show, suddenly, an advertisement appears and you feel just want to break the TV. That what advertising today is doing in our life. I think it is a trouble, they alwayts encourage us to buy the unneed products.
In digital life, advertising is a strong industry whick take a huge effect t our life. The development of advertising is incredible. By showing the products form companies, advertisements directly make shopping now more easily. People just have to watch advertisements about products, analyze them, summarise them and make decision: buy or not buy.
How do advertisements come to people? Answer is through social media: TV, radio and The Internet. The most convenient way but so annoyed. If there is a schedule for advertisements, there is no ideas. But advertisements is always interupting the Tv shows, radio shows and full of screen in web pages.It takes so much time from the shows that we don’t join it. An advertisement, for example, is about 15 minute long or more than it. That is really make us angry. Not only too long, but also they are repetitive. The same proucts, same fuction, but they appears more than three times during a show, especially the products which we don’t need. I find they are disaster.
I don’t know much about advertising but the way they work, is unacceptable. In our digital life today, advertising should change its approaching to people with friedliness.
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Most advertisements make products seem much better then they really are. 60
- Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish.Why do you think this is happening?What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced?Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.W
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'there are no ideas'?
Suggestion: there are no ideas
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: It
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'made'.
Suggestion: made
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Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'appear'
Suggestion: appear
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...hey appears more than three times during a show, especially the products which we...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, really, so, for example, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 43.0788530466 67% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 52.1666666667 38% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1233.0 1977.66487455 62% => OK
No of words: 249.0 407.700716846 61% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95180722892 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97237131171 4.48103885553 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02625298442 2.67179642975 113% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 212.727598566 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.618473895582 0.524837075471 118% => OK
syllable_count: 377.1 618.680645161 61% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.1344086022 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.8996151061 48.9658058833 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 64.8947368421 100.406767564 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.1052631579 20.6045352989 64% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.47368421053 5.45110844103 45% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217581709521 0.236089414692 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0682590732832 0.076458572812 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0427061831408 0.0737576698707 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135452921445 0.150856017488 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00765490938697 0.0645574589148 12% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 11.7677419355 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 58.1214874552 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.1575268817 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.54 10.9000537634 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.64 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 86.8835125448 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.0537634409 72% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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