Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Most experiences in our lives that seemed difficult at the time become valuable lessons for the future. Use reasons and specific examples to support our answer.
it is no secret that satisfying with job has plays a prominent role in every individual's life. In this regrad, there is a long-standing discussion between experts about whether doing different types of tasks during the workday satisfy workers or doing the similar tasks all the day. I personally contend doing variety of tasks during the workday would be more satisfying for the workers. In the following paragraphs, I will delve elaborate on my viewpoint through two noticeable reasons.
First and foremost, it is established beyond doubt that doing different types of tasks during the workday would lead to worker force not become bored and as a result of this, workers would be more satisfied with their workplace. completing the same tasks all the day caused that workers to premise that the rate of completing their tasks is at the lowest point and the result of their functions is not considerale so they feel discontent with their tedious job. but if they are assigned for different tasks, they will find this more challenge and exciting that make them more content with their work environment. In addiotion, they can can gain experience and knowledge in various majors. The more and more creative workers would be another result of this approach while they face with various tasks. As managers are always looking for ways to create the work environment attractive, definetly it would be one of the beneficial method. However, this not certainly the end of the story.
The second pivotal reasons that is worth being taken into account meticulously is that by doing different tasks in a workplace, workers will come be aware that they are not the ones who are dealing with tasks, so they will become more satisfied. According to the results of a survey conducted in my country, majority of workers always think that their task is harder than their colleagues and just thay are the ones who are dealing with tough work. but if they workers do different tasks, they will find out that the their former viewpoint was compeletely wrong so they do understand each other better. my own experience is a compelling example of this, last year I was working as a secretary in an office, one of my co-workers always though that I was doing nothing and her job is more difficult than me. Complating to our manager that why he gave me the same amount of salary as she receive. our boss decided to adopt the same approach that I mentioned, he asked my colleague to do my duties for one week. After that week, she admitted that she had made a mistake about my duty and also she apoligized me. this example clearly shows how beneficial is it that workers do different tasks in order to make them satisfy with their job.
In conclusion, contemplating the aforementioned reasons lead us to conclude that geting not bored and becoming aware of that we are not the one who ovrwhelmed with hard tasks are reasons why doing diiferent tasks would lead workers to be more satisfied.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...job has plays a prominent role in every individuals life. In this regrad, there is a long-s...
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...feel discontent with their tedious job. but if they are assigned for different task...
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...ir work environment. In addiotion, they can can gain experience and knowledge in variou...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, look, second, so, while, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 29.0 15.1003584229 192% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 21.0 11.0286738351 190% => OK
Pronoun: 76.0 43.0788530466 176% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 58.0 52.1666666667 111% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2486.0 1977.66487455 126% => OK
No of words: 512.0 407.700716846 126% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85546875 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.75682846001 4.48103885553 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57480550976 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 238.0 212.727598566 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.46484375 0.524837075471 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 751.5 618.680645161 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 60.4482423235 48.9658058833 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.3 100.406767564 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.6 20.6045352989 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.1 5.45110844103 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.5376344086 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.121006359545 0.236089414692 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0429560116092 0.076458572812 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0256291823951 0.0737576698707 35% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0829338289756 0.150856017488 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0197436079549 0.0645574589148 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 11.7677419355 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 58.1214874552 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 10.9000537634 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 86.8835125448 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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