This topic refers to the most serious problems we are facing today. They involve infectious diseases, famine, and global warming and the like. In this essay, I will first talk about infectious diseases, which are still agonizing us worldwide, mainly because I am a university student specializing in medicine. In my opinion, Infectious diseases will hopefully be curable within our lifetime. After that, I will discuss the global warming in favor of the presented idea. I will further discuss this matter in the following sentences, developing my viewpoint from two perspectives.
First of all, we have developed antibiotics and vaccines from the nineteenth century. They are so strong that we have diminished the number of victims to some infectious diseases. Specifically, we have won the fight against the smallpox some fifty years ago, which had long been a dreadful disease with no preventative medication. People one hundred years ago could not have imagined the triumph over this awful disease. Thus, it is not an exaggeration to state that we would eventually overcome every disease in the near future. This is why I think one of the most serious problems will be solved within our lifetime.
Another reasons is the unprecedented rate of scientific progress. Since the scientific revolution which was accompanied by the industrial revolution in the nineteenth century, the science is making progress with a mesmerizing rate. It has developed transportation system, connected two remote places together via the internet through the undersea cables, and predict the weather using supercomputers. Science has served as a catalyst for social changes. Therefore, the problems we are facing today, such as global warming, would definitely be solved in some decades. We can foresee what would happen if we continue to burn fossil fuels or damp plastic straws into the sea. It requires our best possible efforts to curb the progression of such problems, but I am convinced that we can struggle to solve them. In fact, some companies are already moving forward to stop the environmental problems. As far as I know, some famous coffee chains have substituted paper straws for plastic ones. These small steps will lead to the solution to the environmental problems like global warming.
Drawing from these examples, the problems today will surely be solved within this century so I subscribe to the presented idea.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 17, Rule ID: AGREEMENT_SENT_START[4]
Message: You should probably use: 'are'.
Suggestion: are
...within our lifetime. Another reasons is the unprecedented rate of scientific pr...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, so, still, therefore, thus, i think, in fact, such as, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 41.0 43.0788530466 95% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 52.1666666667 86% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2034.0 1977.66487455 103% => OK
No of words: 387.0 407.700716846 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25581395349 4.8611393121 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43534841618 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85182830901 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 226.0 212.727598566 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.583979328165 0.524837075471 111% => OK
syllable_count: 635.4 618.680645161 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.7164596141 48.9658058833 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.4347826087 100.406767564 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8260869565 20.6045352989 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.26086956522 5.45110844103 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159083469685 0.236089414692 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0458565667299 0.076458572812 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.069859747465 0.0737576698707 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109047734595 0.150856017488 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0252223260055 0.0645574589148 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 11.7677419355 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 58.1214874552 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.93 10.9000537634 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 8.01818996416 111% => OK
difficult_words: 110.0 86.8835125448 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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