Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
The most important ways to improve the people’s health is to clean the environment.
Since the dawn of humanity, having healthy life has played a crucial role in the progress of human life. In this line of thoughts, some people are of the opinion that there are salient factors for health process. In contrast, I personally subscribe to the view that the most vital way to be healthy is cleaning the environment. I feel this for two main reasons. In the following paragraphs, my reasons will be elaborated on this issue in more detail.
To begin with, there is no secret to the fact that residents are surrounded by their environment; it affects directly providing a comfortable life. generally speaking, individuals basic needs such as foods, shelters, and safety are depended on the the environment. The more cleaning environment people have, the less illness they would gain. To delve more into it, take my grandfather experience as an example. He lived in a village, and his was a farmer. His grandfather and all its family were died because of the water contamination. water is a basic need for each person and also provides a healthy food; therefore, it must be clean. it indicates that people’s life relate directly on the clean environment.
Another reason is that residents of large cities tend to be more vulnerable to mental illnesses rather than people who live in country sides. In fact, air pollution gives rise to individuals get depressed in small scale, and even in a large scale, they become prone to suicide more than people living in rural arias. As a case in point, people who breath carbon dioxide every day their brain deprives from fresh air and it makes them too sick, and it clearly reduces the quality of life; however, if they live in a clean air place, they will obtain welfare and thrills. that is why psychologists always heal their patients with fresh and clean weather, suggesting to go mountains and forests. All in all, people will be both healthy with living in clean environment, and improve the standards of living with this situation.
Drawing upon the reasons that I mentioned above, although there are several exceptions excluded from general rule, I believe that the clean environment is the most important factor for being healthy. Not only do basic demands depend on our surroundings, but also with this circumstance, people can possess mental health too.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, therefore, i feel, in contrast, in fact, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 43.0788530466 88% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1934.0 1977.66487455 98% => OK
No of words: 392.0 407.700716846 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93367346939 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44960558625 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67562520184 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 226.0 212.727598566 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.576530612245 0.524837075471 110% => OK
syllable_count: 595.8 618.680645161 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.86738351254 321% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.4084318344 48.9658058833 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.7 100.406767564 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6 20.6045352989 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.55 5.45110844103 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214685555755 0.236089414692 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0597315115354 0.076458572812 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0558424429207 0.0737576698707 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133598085427 0.150856017488 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0444039922888 0.0645574589148 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 10.9000537634 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 86.8835125448 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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