Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Movies and Televisions have more negative effects than positive effects on the way young people behave.
Nowadays, they are a lot more telecommunication devices in comparison with before and they are easier available for every age from child to old people. As I am concerned availability of such a tremendous data has more negative points rather than positive points on young people because not only does it influence on their thinking style easily, but it also demonstrates a huge amount of coincidence facts together which makes difficult to them to choose the right way.
The first reason should be mentioned here is that teenagers are in very vital stage in their life because their thinking, wearing, talking and behaving style is forming. Thus they are like a very smooth matter that can be shaped easily. The availability of the TV movies makes it easier to affect their lifestyle. Especially they can easily mimic the celebrities lifestyle instead of normal people who can change their way in their entire life. But there is a few number of people can meet the goals like famous people. So this will be very disappointing for young people till their end of their life because of choosing the incorrect way for their life.
The other reason to point out is that there is a lot of conflicting facts are shown by TV shows. It is very obvious that detecting the truth from worth is very challenging for young people because of lack of enough experience by youth. Therefore, they are always struggling to find the right way. But it is unavoidable to make mistake by them just because of their less knowledge about issues.
Last but not the least young people always rely on their favorite movie stars on TV shows and try to copy their behavior whether they act correctly or not.
In the final analysis, teenagers are more affected by negative points by television show rather than its positive points. Finally, it is suggested to limit youth to watch every movies.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 170, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
... talking and behaving style is forming. Thus they are like a very smooth matter that...
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Line 2, column 351, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'celebrities'' or 'celebrity's'?
Suggestion: celebrities'; celebrity's
...e. Especially they can easily mimic the celebrities lifestyle instead of normal people who ...
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Line 2, column 460, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun number seems to be countable; consider using: 'few numbers'.
Suggestion: few numbers
...ay in their entire life. But there is a few number of people can meet the goals like famou...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, if, so, therefore, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 33.0 43.0788530466 77% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 52.1666666667 86% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1547.0 1977.66487455 78% => OK
No of words: 322.0 407.700716846 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80434782609 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56132869643 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 212.727598566 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.552795031056 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 489.6 618.680645161 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.4920972782 48.9658058833 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.133333333 100.406767564 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4666666667 20.6045352989 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.33333333333 5.45110844103 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.139696513998 0.236089414692 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0474576542284 0.076458572812 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0484402974687 0.0737576698707 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0905173280986 0.150856017488 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0384002892492 0.0645574589148 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 11.7677419355 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.56 10.9000537634 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.91 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 86.8835125448 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 10.002688172 185% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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