Television and movies have a very large place in our lives. Even many people schedule their daily lives according to broadcast stream of some channels. In think, watching TV/movies so much is the main reason of our laziness and in my view they have more negative effects than positive effects. My opinion is based on personal social and psychological reasons.
Personally, I can definitely see the change in myself which dissatisfy me. I used to read more books and spear more time to myself. But now, the first thing is to open the TV or watch a movie when I come from work or before go to sleep. Sometimes I sacrifice from my sleep to watch another episode of a series. Moreover, because of the lack of sleep I can not work efficiently and I always feel tired. Worse, I can not focus on the things that I do during the day such as studying, reading and even sometimes chatting. Furthermore, now it is more difficult for me to understand some documents/paper and so on since my head is full with unimportant TV nonsense.
Socially, the things that I am observed on me is valid for the others. Also, the TV programs and movies have a terrible effect on people especially the younger ones. Teenagers and children are affected from the TV series and they become wannabes. These wannabes are suppose to be our future however, because of the TV/film sector it is ruined. Besides of the young generation, this sector badly affected adults as well. Why? Because no one talks while watching something, after that everyone gets tired and sleep. This vicious cycle is the main reason of miscommunication. Hence, people gets lonely in their homes.
Psychologically, the themes of the movies/series are mostly based on violence, war, fight and so on. Watching these kinds of programs everyday can harm our mentality and psychology particularly the younger people. Additionally, TV programs looks these bad things good by using cheerful music or something else. This could be very dangerous since sometimes young people is not able to know right from wrong. Also, TV and movies are a way to manipulate people. In many different periods, people made believe or support some ideas and in time they started to be against the ideas they were defending before. Thus, we need to watch less but read more to have a right and strong opinions.
In a nutshell, TV and movies have more negative effects than we thought so it is urgent to minimize its place in our lives.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 267, Rule ID: SUPPOSE_TO[1]
Message: Probably you should use a past participle here: 'supposed'.
Suggestion: supposed
...hey become wannabes. These wannabes are suppose to be our future however, because of th...
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Line 5, column 267, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'supposed'.
Suggestion: supposed
...hey become wannabes. These wannabes are suppose to be our future however, because of th...
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Line 7, column 135, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...so on. Watching these kinds of programs everyday can harm our mentality and psychology p...
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Line 7, column 463, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...vies are a way to manipulate people. In many different periods, people made believe or support...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, furthermore, hence, however, if, look, moreover, so, thus, well, while, even so, such as, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 13.8261648746 166% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 44.0 43.0788530466 102% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 52.1666666667 104% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2036.0 1977.66487455 103% => OK
No of words: 426.0 407.700716846 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.779342723 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.54310108192 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69260593822 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 229.0 212.727598566 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.537558685446 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 644.4 618.680645161 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.6003584229 131% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.2029410175 48.9658058833 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 75.4074074074 100.406767564 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7777777778 20.6045352989 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.7037037037 5.45110844103 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 11.8709677419 25% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 16.0 3.85842293907 415% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197175858938 0.236089414692 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0484521094789 0.076458572812 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0711965262257 0.0737576698707 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133071384693 0.150856017488 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0759732431869 0.0645574589148 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 11.7677419355 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 58.1214874552 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.1575268817 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 10.9000537634 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.68 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 86.8835125448 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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