Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? My lifestyle is easier and more comfortable than the one my grandparents experienced when they were young. Use specific reasons and examples to support your choice.
I do feel that my lifestyle is more easier as compared to my grandparent's lifestyle. I think I am living my life more comfortably than my forefathers lived for the reasons that I have elucidated in below paragraphs.
Firstly, I have more flexibility in choosing my clothing styles. Back in the 1900s, our clothing style was prettly much defined by our society. In order to include ourself in the list of decorous person, we were obliged to followed those predefined clothing styles. But, now we are independent to choose our clothing style based on comfort and interest. As a result, I subsribe to my viewpoint that our lifestyle is more comfortable than our grandparent's lifestyle.
Seondly, we are empowered to choose our career based on our interest. During the era of my grandparents, people worked so that they could put some food on their plate and fulfill the basic necessities. However, with the advent of modernization in our society, we now have the flexibility of pursuing our career based on our area of interest. Also, currently we having wider range of career options to select for. For example, my father is a diamond merchant. But, I didn't chose to join his business as I was interested in engineering. Therefore, I pursued mechanical engineering and am currently working as mechanical design engineer in a comfortable AC cabin. Since, I am working in the area of my choice, I am enjoying my work and have never felt it to be an arduous task. My grandparents weren't fortunate enough to choose their career based on their passion and therefore they had succumb to some phsycial as well psychological stress. Based on the illustration, I truly that my lifestyle is more easier than my grandparent's.
Lastly, we are now having access to wide varieties of food options. Due to globalization, we can now easily find the products that were once quite difficult to find for. This enables us to lead to even more healthy lifestyle. For example, dragon fruit is highly beneficial in increasing out blood platelets. However, about 50 years back, this fruit was not easily available in the Indian market. But due to globalization, it's now easily available in the Indian market at a nominal price. Since, we are now having more option in deciding the foods, I contend that our lifestyle is much more easier.
Based on the abive illustrations, I posit that we are able to live our lives in much more comforatble and easier manner than our forefather did.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 32, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'easier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: easier
I do feel that my lifestyle is more easier as compared to my grandparents lifestyl...
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Line 1, column 44, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[3]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
...o feel that my lifestyle is more easier as compared to my grandparents lifestyle. ...
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Line 3, column 183, Rule ID: BASIC_FUNDAMENTALS[1]
Message: Use simply 'necessities'.
Suggestion: necessities
...ome food on their plate and fulfill the basic necessities. However, with the advent of modernizat...
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Line 3, column 466, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
...my father is a diamond merchant. But, I didnt chose to join his business as I was int...
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Line 3, column 791, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: weren't
... to be an arduous task. My grandparents werent fortunate enough to choose their career...
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Line 3, column 884, Rule ID: HAD_VBP[1]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'succumbed'.
Suggestion: succumbed
...on their passion and therefore they had succumb to some phsycial as well psychological ...
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Line 3, column 884, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'succumbed'.
Suggestion: succumbed
...on their passion and therefore they had succumb to some phsycial as well psychological ...
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Line 3, column 995, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'easier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: easier
...ustration, I truly that my lifestyle is more easier than my grandparents. Lastly, we are n...
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Line 4, column 338, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...latelets. However, about 50 years back, this fruit was not easily available in the I...
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Line 4, column 585, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'easier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: easier
...s, I contend that our lifestyle is much more easier. Based on the abive illustrations, I p...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, lastly, so, therefore, well, for example, i think, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 69.0 43.0788530466 160% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 54.0 52.1666666667 104% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2042.0 1977.66487455 103% => OK
No of words: 420.0 407.700716846 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8619047619 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52701905584 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92429420521 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 212.727598566 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.497619047619 0.524837075471 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 663.3 618.680645161 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 23.0 9.59856630824 240% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.7222879335 48.9658058833 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.68 100.406767564 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8 20.6045352989 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.08 5.45110844103 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.5376344086 181% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 11.8709677419 152% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217122350217 0.236089414692 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0716870576023 0.076458572812 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0889951702634 0.0737576698707 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145029580128 0.150856017488 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0968037910182 0.0645574589148 150% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 11.7677419355 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 58.1214874552 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.61 10.9000537634 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 86.8835125448 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.